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for You will always be mine

by Valdziune

person yumenohime-sama
schedule June 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG! Please continue this story! *Q* it's getting interesting..>.<
schedule February 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow very very good and intense...please update this story soon!!!!
schedule October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think you need someone to proofread this. It's spelt "kitsune" not "Kitsiune". You've also misspelt Naruto as "Naturo" and Sasuke as "Saske". Additionally, dot points are not quotation marks- your creativity is admirable but in reality it just makes this annoying to read.
schedule October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
man, poor Naru just isn't winning here is he.
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
dammit Sas, where the hell are you! I;m not sure if Naru can handle being attacked again.
schedule October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awsome!
schedule September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sas is going to have his work cut out for him and He's sooooooooooooooooooooooo gonna hunt tachi down and murderate him when he finds out what tachi did.
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awsome work. I really want to know more =)
schedule September 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Keep it up. =)