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June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It was angsty at first but hot &sexy in the end..
I hope & wish that eventually sasuke would come back & be a sweet boy again that he truly was..
But i guess for now it will just gonna be in our dreams..
We all know how much hatred he carries in his whole being right now.. Vengeance would always be his option..
Nice Job, a bit OOC but it is greatly appreciated..
A girl can dream, right..
More power, happy writing..
Long hair love,
~A.E.
I hope & wish that eventually sasuke would come back & be a sweet boy again that he truly was..
But i guess for now it will just gonna be in our dreams..
We all know how much hatred he carries in his whole being right now.. Vengeance would always be his option..
Nice Job, a bit OOC but it is greatly appreciated..
A girl can dream, right..
More power, happy writing..
Long hair love,
~A.E.
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September 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, although I must say I'm not really a fan of Sasuke/Sakura pairings, your story was nice. A little too short for my taste, but nice nonetheless.
I believe that maybe you should take a little more time when describing the setting and actions of each character, and brush up your spelling a little bit. Your vs you're... keep an eye out for that kind of mistakes.
Finally, for your first story, it's pretty good! Keep on writing!
I believe that maybe you should take a little more time when describing the setting and actions of each character, and brush up your spelling a little bit. Your vs you're... keep an eye out for that kind of mistakes.
Finally, for your first story, it's pretty good! Keep on writing!