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by foxkitsune300

schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I do love this story. I was waiting for some sex, but rape will do. Hope Kakashi gets laid soon. Poor Iruka. Did I mention Huskies are my favorite breed. ^_^
person DewiSri
schedule October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Am much enjoying the story.The behaviour you describe to the dogs is quite accurate, i can appreciate that.

The only note i could give you is that you sometimes seem to 'skip' out parts of the story. Making it unclear what exactly happend. Other than that, im loving it.

Please do keep on writing, and if you can give me a signal when you've uploaded a new chapter. =)
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*squeeee* I LOVE that Gaara and Neji are two more beautiful dogs in the story!! I had a great laugh at Naruto telling Sasuke, "NOT forgiven...bring me some dessert..." I Cracked up!!XD
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the understanding Naruto has for the dogs, that makes it fun reading. Too bad for Sasuke that Kakashi doesn't like him but I hope they get along soon.:)
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was a sweet tender moment with Kakashi and Iruka and I'm glad everything has worked out for them all. I guess the previous owner was too afraid of Kakashi to try anything.XD Hopefully they will be closer than ever now and when they get back maybe Naruto and Sasuke can catch the guys to put a stop to the puppy napping. Great chapter!!!! I'm so glad ur writer's block was fixed and that you've finished the story. I soooo look forward to another update!! Take care!!:)
schedule October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
dont give this story up!!!
person Caracalla
schedule October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Update? :3
schedule September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay!! Another update! I almost forgot about Naruto's 'problem' n thought Kabuto was playing at something. Maybe now since Sasuke will see that Kakashi saved Naruto he will like him better.:)
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please don't stop!!!! Thank you for continuing for us!
schedule September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I love that they already have Iruka as a pet. So cute n funny what Sasuke said to Iruka about keeping an eye on Kakashi. I lo e this story already.:d