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by katokachan

schedule October 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! Itachi wanted to shoot Sasuke's toe again!! That's so hilarious!! Thanks for the comic relief.:d yaaay!! Action next chapter!! Soooo, Kakuzu is the big boss of Yukio. Naruto might be in for torturous times up ahead. Especially if his number 1 henchman is Hidan. o.o
person Caroline
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Thumbs up =)
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Naruto looked at his mirror and noticed a car, which now that he actually thought about it, had been following him for a while already.
"Hello?"
"Sasuke, by any chance are you-?
"Naruto?"
"Your little sex toy won't be able to save you this time" the familiar voice shoved Naruto in the trunk and the dark vehicle drove in the opposite direction.
In about a few hours they were out of city limits." This kind of lost me, one second Naruto's driving the next stuffed into a trunk? otherwise I love it

schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better n better. I'm so afraid for Naruto of the shock n disappointment his friends will be in when they find out about Sasuke. What is Sasuke going to do about his brother much worse his father when They find out? This is such a mess. Poor Naruto's trying to do the right thing but love is, I guess, confusing him.
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Happy Birthday!!!! Early!!! I hope u have an Incredible celebration!!:)
This chapter was great with the guys talking about Naruto n then Sasuke n Itachi kinda talking it out. Is Itachi angry but just saying anything yet? Man! It's going to be gard for them to hide their relationship. I bet Kiba will do some checking up on Sasuke cuz he's the angriest it seems. I guess Shikamaru doesn't really have a reason that he'd check into it. So poor Hinata had a crush on Naruto, huh? Wonder what Naruto would say now if he found out about that. LOL!!! I love how possessive U make Sasuke in this! *sqeeeee* it makes reading this story That much more exciting!!!
person sara101
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
absolutely love this story cant wait till you update it!!!
person sara101
schedule September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
loving this story can't wait till the next chapter hehe
person mattey
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuk yea! Keep it up
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awsome! Keep it up =)
person Joyce
schedule September 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say that I'm already completly in love with this story