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for Clash of missions

by Ookami88

person Anon
schedule September 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Are you high? A Jounin would stand no chance against post-war a Naruto in any form.
person tom80
schedule June 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Will you continue this Story ?
person chm01
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
are you updating this soon? please?
person londra
schedule August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Maybe you should let sasuke and sakura join the mission as a other pair of slave and trainer.
Make sakura and hinata fight each other in a sexfight winnaar gets to fuck the loser and whit help of her master.
schedule January 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sure I wouldn't mind discussing ideas with you since its always nice to hear if other people think an idea would work or not. And I do like your story and can't wait for you to update your story on here. And since it's harder to talk author to author on this site if you want justw send me a pm on fan fiction since I know you have an account there my name is the same there as here.
schedule December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, I must say! When will the next chapter come out?
person magic713
schedule November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. There seems to be at least one person who at the very least cares for the well-fair of the slaves or at least one of the slaves. I'd like to see more of how you develop this character, like how he got into the business, and how he treats other slaves and how Naruto feels about betraying him personally.
schedule November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Won't lie, part of me wants her to stay his sex slave, or act like, one, even after they escape, confess their love, etc. Curious, once you finish this wonderful story, could you do an AU chapter where Naruto decided he liked this too much, really did turn her into his personal happy sex slave? lol
person Takai153
schedule October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'd like to see some anal and dp (preferably by shadow clone gangbang). Beyond that, ya got me. I'm not really the creative type, sorry. Hope you'll get some inspiration soon.
person magic713
schedule October 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. It must be really killing Naruto to using his gift of encouraging others, to give confidence to these bandits, and rapists to defeat their enemies at the beginning of chapter 3.

So Naruto finally realizes he love Hinata. Great chapter. Plz update soon.