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August 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM
a really lovely store why did you stop
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September 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, I have dreamed up many scenarios for the continuation - but as I have learned in the fanfiction universe Never expect a story to be finished....
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December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this vamp fic more than any of the others so far. You write these three very well. :D
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December 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE finish!! I am in love after reading all 5 chaps in one shot today!!
Im love the affectionate Madara and fugaku instead of them being douches like usual. Sasukes vunerbility with his fathers death is so adorable and naruto is so darn cute - melt
Im love the affectionate Madara and fugaku instead of them being douches like usual. Sasukes vunerbility with his fathers death is so adorable and naruto is so darn cute - melt
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February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi! just passing by (again)! I love to read and re-read your stories. I love it, really! I hope that you continue writing your stories I love them! i really excited to see what will happen next! Please continue!
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January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
This is an amazing story. I like that you are not too big on needless descriptions and there are few grammatical as well as spelling mistakes. I have read (or rather tried to read) atrocious things here regarding those mistakes. My mind is forever scarred.
Am I to assume that Minato gave birth to Naruto?
Naruto is a very sensitive person and I like that he is highly emotional in this story, and that Sasuke is not such a bastard as some other tend to make him seem. Naruto is very smart and not a "dumb blonde", forgive the offense.
There is a bit of a gap in the Naruto and Kakashi's background as partners, such as Kakashi's age, if they are roommates, what happened for them to break up again, is Kakashi really so in love with Naruto as it seems, etc.
The part where Sasuke and Fugaku are outside and Fugaku notices his Light is dying/dead is a bit vague. I'm assuming that since it is from a child's point of view that a few things are skipped but still, maybe a bit more of depth on the environment or what they were doing before Fugaku started back to the house.
AFF doesn't show the date of the story so I'm not sure if this is a 2006 story or a late 2011 post. So if it ancient, I'm sorry for disturbing, but if not then I hope you continue with your line of thinking.
In any case, congratulations and thank you for taking the time to write.
Hugs,
P.
This is an amazing story. I like that you are not too big on needless descriptions and there are few grammatical as well as spelling mistakes. I have read (or rather tried to read) atrocious things here regarding those mistakes. My mind is forever scarred.
Am I to assume that Minato gave birth to Naruto?
Naruto is a very sensitive person and I like that he is highly emotional in this story, and that Sasuke is not such a bastard as some other tend to make him seem. Naruto is very smart and not a "dumb blonde", forgive the offense.
There is a bit of a gap in the Naruto and Kakashi's background as partners, such as Kakashi's age, if they are roommates, what happened for them to break up again, is Kakashi really so in love with Naruto as it seems, etc.
The part where Sasuke and Fugaku are outside and Fugaku notices his Light is dying/dead is a bit vague. I'm assuming that since it is from a child's point of view that a few things are skipped but still, maybe a bit more of depth on the environment or what they were doing before Fugaku started back to the house.
AFF doesn't show the date of the story so I'm not sure if this is a 2006 story or a late 2011 post. So if it ancient, I'm sorry for disturbing, but if not then I hope you continue with your line of thinking.
In any case, congratulations and thank you for taking the time to write.
Hugs,
P.
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December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love this story so far !!looking forward for more clues... see you soon
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November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More please i love this story
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November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have read all of the available chappies, and look forward to reading the next chappie in the near future :)!
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October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow I can't believe I missed a chappie!!! I totally love this story^^ And Sasuke losing control that was so hot ^^ I can't wait for more!!! I really hope to hear from you soon!!!!