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for Nocturnal Dreams

by Snowway32

schedule October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY!!!XD
person Uchiha_Red
schedule October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was an interesting development in the story. This isthe first time I was allowed to review this story. I liked it when you only had the first three 'chapters' out, but this is one of my favorites. :) Keep going. And I like that idea, Madara being the eccentric good guy. Too often he's been portrayed as the evil and very cold and calculating uncle, even if he's like that in the manga and anime.
person lunayolly
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice! Love the sex scene with Itachi and Sasuke. I love that Naruto knows how to paint. Poor Sasuke remembering his father death by Narutos panting. I hope that Naruto helps Sasuke with his suffering. I think they can relate in some way.
schedule October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
the nick name is just adorable.
Neh? If Itachi has his lil bro's as his mates (i assume that's what light and dark are) how do they breed? Or do close family ties not mess with the genetics of the born vamp?
I hope we can find out who killed of Naru's important people and that Naru can help Sas begin to cope with Fugaku's death and that they can help Naru deal with his losses too.
person quittie
schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
lovely read! I'll definitely be waiting for the next chapters!
person qwerty
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! Would love to know more about the vampire world and the age-old hatred Itachi hinted to
Keep going!
person smint45
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was amazing!!!I really loved it!!!! So Naruto is their brother ^^ great!!! Hope Itachi hurrs I really don't like seeing Naruto in so much confiusion!!! He really has no idea what is going on!!!! I can't wait for more!!!! See you soon!!!
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor naru. he's so stressed out and confused right now. And then you got the supernatural crap happening on top of it. Sigh, good thing sas is with him. With all this and his special abilities acting up, if he was by himself he'd probably self destruct.
I wonder, once they get him bonded and settled, if they'll let him go back to work. heh, probably not.
I also wonder why the were's are sniffing around him. The hunter thing is a bit worrisome too, i hope he gets answers on his da and jiji in the end.
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heh, i guess vamps have different rules regarding blood relations and bedroom activities. They'll be good for him i think, though Keshi's likely to be a bit cut.
person lunayolly
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! This is really interesting! Can't wait for the threesome. *giggle*. The light and dark concept is really interesting and I want to know more about it. Also I'm curious on what will happen with Kashi and Naruto now. This is really interesting! I can't wait for more and see what will happen in the future! I love it! LOL. Now I'm repeating.