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for A Birthday Show

by LadySmaell

person sris
schedule November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Uuh, what a great secretive beginning. You really had my curiosity peaking. I like your writing style and the fic was through and through fun to read. You stayed wonderfully true to the characters from the anime/manga and that's something I can really appreciate. Iruka's show was so delicious, just fantastic! And the way Kakashi realized who the performer was, priceless! I loved the way Iruka reacted on Kakashi's confession of liking him. The sex was absolutely HOT! Amazingly enjoyable read, truly! I'm sorry to see you don't have other fics here, so hurry up and write some more! (I'm beginning to feel I'm abusing the exclamation mark now, but what can I say? It was just that good!) Thanks for sharing! I'm definitely going to add you as one of my recommended authors.

PS. Have you noticed the font you used is tiny?