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for Benevolent

by katokachan

person EmmyBBerry
schedule November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha adorable chaper, can feel things getting a bit tense now, cant wait to see what happens! Always willing to Beta if you want?
schedule October 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
There!?! You stopped there!?? *mumbling in a corner sulking... stopping there...nice long chapter... still ended too soon... need more info... now now now darnit'*
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
man they are adorable together...though you can just see that sas past is going to come back to bite them... still, the guy is 17. He only has a year or so before he;s legal and tell them to shove it.
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy both hearing what they think and knowing what they are doing.

As for the story itself, I quite enjoy it. Please continue to update.
schedule October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
cute and awkward... really fun to read. I like it when a scene describes the action and the thoughts. It would actually have been a lot more difficult without the lube though.
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome!
person Allie
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is fucking cute.
schedule September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! Sasuke wants help pumping it orrrr thinking of somethingvto pump it to.:)). I know Naruto's voice sounds so sexy.
schedule September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
whoo hoo! I so liked that! It was adorable how close they are and how they are always together. The little hints of awareness that kept cropping up during the swimming ... and Sasuke carrying Naruto on his back... those were just so sweet. And that last part... Sasuke needs some helpppppp!!! :) I'm really liking reading this.
person DD
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Super adorable!!