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for Liquid Passion

by abigailpa

person Jan
schedule May 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I absolutely love this story, I can't wait for chapter 12 to be updated ^_^
schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Maybe you can put up a couple more chapters, show what their life is like now. Something like that. Please keep up the good work and update soon. :)
schedule May 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I want to see what happens to Sasuke so please update soon and keep up the good work. :)
schedule May 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You reposted chapter 8 in chapter 9's place
schedule May 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So I totally didn't see Sasuke and the kid from the island being the ones that were in the room but I like it none the less. Oh and chapters 8 and 9 are the same, just wanted to let you know. Please keep up the good work and update soon. :)
schedule October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Kakashi, my love . . . Will the boy reappear? Now I'm curous about him.
person Stacy
schedule October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow that was hot! I really can't wait to read more! Please do one with Genma. He is such a babe!
schedule October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is really hot, can't wait to read more. I really hope sasuke isn't the guy waiting for naruto to fuck him in the end though. Now normally I am a big time sasuke/naruto whore, but I feel this pairing doesn't fit this story. I mean, sasuke isn't part of there life, hes a missing nin and seems to have had no part in any ones lives for years, it would be to big a leap if all of a sudden while all this is going on, sasuke just pops up like nothing. Just out of the blue part of there lives, with everything that has happened, just so naruto can fuck him?...bound or not it just doesn't fit in my opinion. D: I hate when I get into amazing stories, and all of a sudden they throw in things that just don't fit at all or make sense. Lol Pet peeve, I have a hard time continuing to read the stories when that happens. "xD
I like whats going on so far, and I can't wait to see who's waiting to have a sex fest with naruto...but after this latest chapter, it would be fucken amazing if the person waiting was the native amethyst eyed boy. xD He sounded hot, and naruto seemed to really like him, he couldn't get the boy out of his head. And it seems the boy loved watching naruto while he was being fucked like crazy. I bet when naruto disappeared before the native boy could recover from his intense orgasm, left him wanting to find naruto...the mystery sexy blond man. ;D I can see something growing between them. Maybe he can be the guy who finally replaces sasuke. Unless you plan to go feather with this story. You could always add sasuke much later, like when naruto is loosing him self in a life of sex, sasuke discoverers them somehow...over come with lust for naruto, he wont allow anyone to touch him and plans a way to get naruto later. (Shrug) Either way I just can't get over the native. xD
Can't wait too see what you come up with, good luck. :D
person Stacy
schedule October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok I love the amethyst color! I think Sasuke would look totally hot with amethyst eyes. People having sex on the beach by a waterfall I have never personally seen. My life is sooooo boring! I need to get out more!!
schedule September 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liking this!!! Continue!