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for Hold On Tightly, Let Go Lightly

by yolotengo

schedule November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww... You shocked me with an epiloge! I was checking the new stories and almost right above mine was yours! Awesome job, I really did love this story.
schedule November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woot! that was so sweet, they make a great couple. I hope you write another story. I'd really like to see them get a(some)kid(s). Thanks so much for the great story ^_^
person Stellina
schedule November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Meh, I wasn't that disappointed. Sorry, it's been forever since I reviewed because my computer crashed and I had a death in the family. But I really like the story so far!! ^^

(Ch15)
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person Stellina
schedule November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
w00t!! Minato was captured!! Yaa~y!! :D great job so far!! :)

(ch17)
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person Stellina
schedule November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! He's back! Woo-hoo!! I can't wait for big, sad, softy Itachi to visit Naru!! :D

(ch18)
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person Stellina
schedule November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Loved it~! Lol, I love mushy, gushy love!! :D Awesome job, keep it up!! ^^

(ch19)
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person Stellina
schedule November 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwh~! ^^ That was such a sweet ending :')... although I do have one question: Was Sasu naked when he paid for the pizza? :/

(ch20)
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schedule November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOOT I was cheer at the end of this fic when he got life. I was glad that you gave Naruto some closer. I really loved this story thanks for posting it. ^_^ Your a really good writer. Well we see a sequel to this one?
person smint45
schedule November 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was absoloutly fantastic!!!! That ass Minato got everything that he deserved!!! And I just love you kakashi, he was just amazing as shrink ^^ All in all I can say that I really adored this story from the beginning to the end!!!! Thank you so much for sharing it with us!!!! Hope to see you again!!!
schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely adore this story.
as a whole and in chapters.
some were a little to sad tho.
but thats what cliffhangers are for.
and you should put Sai in the next one then.
lol.
i cant wait for the next story from you guys.
your so awesome.
XD.
<3.

~Golden Kitsune~