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October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whats going on? You've lured us into a false sense of routine! No updates for three days, I think Im having withdrawal symptoms! Hahaha hope all is okay =]
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October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg.
i love it.
i cant wait for more.
and thanks for the sexxyy smut.
:].
i loved it.
wonder present.
update soon.
XD.
~Golden Kitsune~
i love it.
i cant wait for more.
and thanks for the sexxyy smut.
:].
i loved it.
wonder present.
update soon.
XD.
~Golden Kitsune~
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October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you put the Paragraph.
"Laying there boneless..."
twice.
just thought id let you know.
love it still.
lol.
~Golden Kitsune~
"Laying there boneless..."
twice.
just thought id let you know.
love it still.
lol.
~Golden Kitsune~
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October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I haven't had a fanfiction get at me like this one has in a very long time. And never has a NARUTO based fiction made me so entranced with the storyline. Gawds, poor Naruto has been through so much and to be able to find something, someone, a light in a dark, endless tunnel. It makes you almost wanna cry! And Sasuke is such a sweetheart. <3 I really loved this and when Itachi came into the story my little fangirl heart seemed to explode even more. This is amazing, do NOT stop, ever. haha, you guys are doing great with this storyline! Good job!
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October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, I check everyday for updates. Virgin Sasuke is soooo cute!!! I do wonder if Kakashi's be involved and I LOVE Itachi.
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October 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story!! Awesome job! I can't wait for the next chapter, please update when ever you have the chance (hopefully soon!) ^^
-Stella(:
-Stella(:
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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lots of chapters to catch up to. :) Naruto's detox experience sounds *rough.* Not that I like watching him suffer, but I'm glad you didn't skip over all the shit that happens when someone goes into withdrawal. It's not a pretty experience, but given how much he was using earlier in the fic, it had to happen.
Sad thing is, after everything else Naruto has been through, the withdrawal might be the easiest thing he goes through in trying to adjust to a normal life where he isn't being abused. It really depressed me when Sasuke said Naruto probably should never be a parent after everything that had happened, but the sad fact of the matter is that he's probably right. Sometimes a person with a really messed up past can be a good parent, but most of the time not. And it's a good example of the fact that in big and small ways, Naruto might always be affected by his experiences. For one thing, Naruto has become so used to being with older men, at this point, I don't think he could have a relationship with another kid his own age even if he wanted to. If Sasuke had been the same age as Naruto, I don't think it could have worked between them. Another 16 year-old wouldn't be emotionally equipped to do everything for Naruto that this Sasuke has done, and I don't think Naruto himself could relate to another 16 year-old anyway. What does a person who has seen and done all the things that Naruto has say to someone whose daily concerns have never been much more complicated than school, soccer practice, and homework? School is another issue where Naruto has been permanently affected by his experiences. It would be good for Naruto if he were to eventually make friends with people his own age (he has been used and abused by adults for his entire life), but at this point, putting him back into regular high school and expecting him to not feel uncomfortable there is probably out.
Finally, it was a shock that Itachi had once been one of Naruto's clients. Even if he was decent enough not to normally sleep with him, even doing it one time was still one time too many. (Sasuke was right to make an issue of it.) But it's true though, occasionally prostitutes' clients are decent people like Itachi who just want to hang out. They aren't necessarily always going to be perverts like Orochimaru. Glad Naruto wasn't always met with nothing but cruelty while he was on the streets. :(
Sad thing is, after everything else Naruto has been through, the withdrawal might be the easiest thing he goes through in trying to adjust to a normal life where he isn't being abused. It really depressed me when Sasuke said Naruto probably should never be a parent after everything that had happened, but the sad fact of the matter is that he's probably right. Sometimes a person with a really messed up past can be a good parent, but most of the time not. And it's a good example of the fact that in big and small ways, Naruto might always be affected by his experiences. For one thing, Naruto has become so used to being with older men, at this point, I don't think he could have a relationship with another kid his own age even if he wanted to. If Sasuke had been the same age as Naruto, I don't think it could have worked between them. Another 16 year-old wouldn't be emotionally equipped to do everything for Naruto that this Sasuke has done, and I don't think Naruto himself could relate to another 16 year-old anyway. What does a person who has seen and done all the things that Naruto has say to someone whose daily concerns have never been much more complicated than school, soccer practice, and homework? School is another issue where Naruto has been permanently affected by his experiences. It would be good for Naruto if he were to eventually make friends with people his own age (he has been used and abused by adults for his entire life), but at this point, putting him back into regular high school and expecting him to not feel uncomfortable there is probably out.
Finally, it was a shock that Itachi had once been one of Naruto's clients. Even if he was decent enough not to normally sleep with him, even doing it one time was still one time too many. (Sasuke was right to make an issue of it.) But it's true though, occasionally prostitutes' clients are decent people like Itachi who just want to hang out. They aren't necessarily always going to be perverts like Orochimaru. Glad Naruto wasn't always met with nothing but cruelty while he was on the streets. :(
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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Sasuke!!! With their rivalry I don't know how Sasuke will be able to let go of Itachi sleeping with Naruto with Naruto hanging all over him like he did. Naruto will need to learn some boyfriend skills on what not to do if he wants things to work out. His past is his past but he can't let that ruin his future by behaving in a way forces Sasuke to see that Naruto isn't his. Sasuke is possessive... he'll want Naruto to belong to him and Naruto wants to belong him too! An insecure Sasuke is painful when Naruto could so easily fix it if he was just aware.
*sigh* But that would take maturity and awareness... not something Naruto is strong on. You're setting up for angst aren't you? Pleeaasseeee say it isn't so! Give Naruto an epiphany... no more hanging on other men! *banging head on desk*
*sigh* But that would take maturity and awareness... not something Naruto is strong on. You're setting up for angst aren't you? Pleeaasseeee say it isn't so! Give Naruto an epiphany... no more hanging on other men! *banging head on desk*
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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg.
that was crazy!
i cant wait for another chapter!
update soon.
and add some smut for good measure!
~Golden Kitsune~
that was crazy!
i cant wait for another chapter!
update soon.
and add some smut for good measure!
~Golden Kitsune~
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October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
seeeeexy! Really really liked that chapter. I'm glad they are taking things slow and that they are letting their relationship build... with the play time included :)
I worry about when Sasuke goes back to work though.
I worry about when Sasuke goes back to work though.