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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was nice!!! Sakura is such a bitch!!! I hoped Tsunade would come, oh well!!! But now they have to get Naruto off the methadon slowly!!! That will take some time and work!!! Poor guy ^^ See you soon!!!
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October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooo.
nice treat!
thank you for that one.
i love this story so update soon.
XD.
~Golden Kitsune~
nice treat!
thank you for that one.
i love this story so update soon.
XD.
~Golden Kitsune~
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October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*contented sigh* that was so sweet... I like Sasuke being all tender with Naruto... and also telling Sakura to get lost lol
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October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh.
interesting.
let me guess?
Itachi!
lol.
nicely done.
cant wait for more.
update soon.
~Golden Kitsune~
interesting.
let me guess?
Itachi!
lol.
nicely done.
cant wait for more.
update soon.
~Golden Kitsune~
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October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god you can't stop here!!!! And you absolouly can't let Naruto die!!! I really hope everything is going to be alright!!! Is this normal for withdrawels? I never witnessed them so I don't know ^^ I hope to hear from you soon!!!
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October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
There!?! It stops there?!!! Noooooo!!!!!!!!!!! I was so into this chapter and it just… stopped! Arrrgggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved the kiss…it was so sweet. Hate knowing Naruto has been abused for so long. Love that Sasuke is getting more used to touching with Naruto. Hate that Orochimaru is twice Sasuke’s age and Naruto slept with him. Love that Sasuke blushes and is kinda hesitant on rushing his first relationship. Hate that Naruto doesn’t know if he can stay clean (he will… right?). Love that Sasuke is right there for him. Hate unexpected cliffhanger (he’s calling Tsudnade right?)
Notice a pattern here? Hmmm? NOW it’s time to write an ‘I love it!!’ chapter. Actually I often like stories that can give a reader strong feelings for the characters- very well done.
I loved the kiss…it was so sweet. Hate knowing Naruto has been abused for so long. Love that Sasuke is getting more used to touching with Naruto. Hate that Orochimaru is twice Sasuke’s age and Naruto slept with him. Love that Sasuke blushes and is kinda hesitant on rushing his first relationship. Hate that Naruto doesn’t know if he can stay clean (he will… right?). Love that Sasuke is right there for him. Hate unexpected cliffhanger (he’s calling Tsudnade right?)
Notice a pattern here? Hmmm? NOW it’s time to write an ‘I love it!!’ chapter. Actually I often like stories that can give a reader strong feelings for the characters- very well done.
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October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
On the whole I like the story, it's not boring and even though the plot is quite "classic" on AFF, it's still pleasure to read.
One thing I really miss is what makes Naruto so special a kid in Sasuke's eyes. Is it just a chance coincidence that he stumbled upon him? In short, I'd like to know more of Naruto as a person. Of course, here goes a story of used & abused + never loved child etc etc, but what makes the boy really attractive, charming maybe?? I fail to see what could attract Sasuke's attention in Nazruto or make him desire a gaunt, scrawny street hooker. Pity or perversion? Or Naruto's vulnerability, helplessness? Or else?
This point I'd like to understand. What's the true reason Uchiha helps the kid? Did Sasuke really *want* the boy from the moment he saw him?..hm. Or maybe Sasuke really has nothing to do with his life or free time..
Naruto keeps reminding me of Leo Di Caprio from "The Titanic":)) Not sure why.
Thank you for updating so quckly and good luck.
One thing I really miss is what makes Naruto so special a kid in Sasuke's eyes. Is it just a chance coincidence that he stumbled upon him? In short, I'd like to know more of Naruto as a person. Of course, here goes a story of used & abused + never loved child etc etc, but what makes the boy really attractive, charming maybe?? I fail to see what could attract Sasuke's attention in Nazruto or make him desire a gaunt, scrawny street hooker. Pity or perversion? Or Naruto's vulnerability, helplessness? Or else?
This point I'd like to understand. What's the true reason Uchiha helps the kid? Did Sasuke really *want* the boy from the moment he saw him?..hm. Or maybe Sasuke really has nothing to do with his life or free time..
Naruto keeps reminding me of Leo Di Caprio from "The Titanic":)) Not sure why.
Thank you for updating so quckly and good luck.
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh wow.
i love how i dont rad this for a few days and you already have 4 more chapters up.
keep it up.
im really looking forward to the rest.
naruto and sasukes relationship.
not the past.
ew.
some people.
anyway.
love it so far.
~Golden Kitsune~
i love how i dont rad this for a few days and you already have 4 more chapters up.
keep it up.
im really looking forward to the rest.
naruto and sasukes relationship.
not the past.
ew.
some people.
anyway.
love it so far.
~Golden Kitsune~
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October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really great!!! I want more ^^ See you!!!
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October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't sure how this was going ot go, but I am really enjoying the interaction you have between Sasuke and Naruto- the fact that you didn't immediately toss them into bed together was a bit of happiness to- I enjoy the story of them learning about each other- I am enjoying this story-