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use: commit to memory.
not: remember.
Shikamaru is a thinking.
and he has problems just going with the flow.
so what ever just fits with the story line.
a date?
a story of her past?
just wherever the story line takes your fingers across the keys.
lol.
i love this so far.
maybe you should add in some Sai time too.
not many of those.
but definitely put in some Shika/OC.
dont forget the hyuuga fight with her either.
definitely want to see that one.
um....what else?
i cant wait for more.
and i love it!
i cant wait for more silly moments either!

~Golden Kitsune~

oh wow.
that chapter was funny as shit.
i cant wait for more.
so update soon.
you'd figure after all the time he'd
spent alone he could have at least
tried to make his culinary skills better?
lol.
just like a stubborn Uchiha.

~Golden Kitsune~

nice.
i like this story a lot so far.
this chapter was pretty funny.
lol.
i cant wait for more.
so...
update soon.

~Golden Kitsune~

hmmm.
i like this so far.
you have made a few errors.
like adding extra letters or missing some.
but its close enough for me.
update soon.
id like to see what kind of training Itachi put her through.
XD.

~Golden Kitsune~

Love where this story is going. Please keep updating!!!

I'm intrigued. Please continue.