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for A Fox's Dream

by abigailpa

schedule October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!! That was so erotic, I was Hot for a long which after reading this. I had to check out Jin to see what he looked like and of course it was extremely Hot n sexy. Loved this n thanks for sharing.:)
person Uchiha_Red
schedule October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was really enjoying the pairings you had for this story, even if some of them I had never thought of putting together before, but just as I was getting used to the idea of Sasuke and Naruto, you blew me away with it actually being Pein! I admit, I never really entertained the thought of a NaruPein story, but now...it makes me curious. I loved the story and the flowing scenery, it all made sense, I didn't have to go back and reread anything other than to try and fit the image of what each individual was wearing to said individual.
I really liked it. :)