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What happens to itachi? Does he die of his disease?

I really like what you've got going on here. The premise is wonderful and your storytelling is fun to take part of. I can only say that you're a bit fond of the semicolon and there are a few grammatical errors throughout, but other than that, wonderful. :)

Oooooooh :::::cries:::: that was so sweet!!!! That waa realy one of the best fics i've read in a long time. I hope the're will be anthere fic maybe of them having the baby? There are so many different ways you could take this. Thanks for the fave fic. :-)

I just saw this story for the first time yesterday, and I've read almost non-stop. I can say that this is the favorite story I've ever read on here! The storyline is one of my favorites, the writing is amazing and everybody is incredibly in character. Especially Sasuke, I love him and hate him just as much. You really showed how he's grown emotionally. I really hope you write a sequel, or a story just as awesome!

Nice to see Sasu was wrong about his father and Naru's mother as spry as always. What a party animal. heh I love that Fugaku still expects a grand child, I wonder how they'll do it. Adopt or surrogate? Very nice wedding, I was expecting a double wedding but I guess only Naru and Sas were prepared for that.

awwww!!!! I loved the ending sweetness and all :)

omgosh I just laughed and laughed over this chapter! I think my favorite part was when Kiba and Kushina woke up Sasuke and Naruto... that whole scene where Kiba was holding the toy and then Sasuke was rethinking everything as Kushina found out about her antique chair... that was awesome. Freakin' awesome.

Now for Sakura... was she actually going to go through with it?!?

ack! I'm so behind... but I just have to review. I love love love this story! I'm at the part where Naruto and his mom are laughing about Sakura trying to sleep with Sasuke while she's trying to break in to her email to prove she's cheating with Gaara. I'm not sure if she is with Gaara (though that seems likely) BUT I think Sakura is trying to MAKE Sasuke call off the wedding. We're so used to her being all clingy so we think it's natural. But when you wrote that one of the moms (Sasuke's I think) said she was so smart that made me remember Sakura saying to herself that maybe she should be MORE clingy. And those hints from others that it was like she was annoying Sasuke on purpose... SHE IS!!!

If her family is broke then they would kill her if she messed up this great deal. For her Sasuke HAS to be the one to break it off. But Gaara... poor guy I still don't see him stuck with her lol. Now you have probably already written WAY past this point in my guessing but oh well.

I loved the rings too... and that whole scene at the beach and Sasuke threatening about the sand lol. Really fun to read :)

*snicker* 'and the fat one looks hungry' lol

I wonder if Sakura found Sasuke's letter he hid... or if she's panicking too? I bet that's why she's still calling. She probably feels like braining him right about now lol.

I don't know why this story doesn't have more reviews. I think it's totally awesome. It's like a movie where every scene furthers the plot... it's really well done. I really really loved when Sasuke broke down in the hospital and cried on Naruto and Naruto's mom saw the whole thing. It's like that scene resolved her feeling toward the situation and made it possible for her to wholly accept Sasuke. Before she probably felt that Naruto loved Sasuke more but I think that changed her mind. That and how he protected Naruto during the crash.

This story just has so much depth to it. *sigh* it's awesome :)

arrggg!!! I am so far behind!!! I'm been saving this story for when I am not half dead falling asleep or distracted by a house full... my last chapter was chapter 8!!! I loved Sakura getting maced by the way. That was freakin' hilarious. Just wanted you to know that I didn't fall off the face of the Earth.