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I love what this story has become. <3 I especially loved the church scene. It was so intimate and sweet.

I can never be mad at sasuke because his personality is, unfortunately very similar to mine. This is part of the reason your story creates such a huge emotional roller coaster for me...it reminds me of my own personality's weak points. Like I said in the beginning, this is an excellent introduction into the aff world. I don't know how long you have been writing but the ability to create the whole spectrum of human emotions in just one chapter is beautiful and definitely a skill to be very proud of. The ending of this chapter had me close to tears. I love how you outlined the whole purity of the church vows with naruto's relationship frustrations and insecurities. There is always happiness at the end but it is never complete and as a reader it makes me really look forward to the day there is a perfect happy ending. Thank you for the chapter and I can't wait to read the next!!!!

Sweet mother of mercy that was HOT!!!! Whoa my hearts pounding.... It's a strange roller coaster though. I get all pissed off because of sasuke's blind stubbornness but you always end with just the two in so hot sexy action and my anger disappears...but my face is still red (for other reasons) (｡-_-｡). I'm really curious how you are going to get sasuke to see the light. Thanks for the great chapter. Hope to read more soon.

you are super talented at writing... you know that right? and I'm so glad you like my reviews because I LOVE GIVING THEM for this story. This kind of chapter is one that some people have a hard time writing... sometimes the emotional feelings get lost in the dom/sub feelings but you did it really well. There's just something about scenes where someone totally gives their control up to someone they trust that I find very appealing. Maybe because in the real world that just isn't the way it is. Love doesn't always go with trust and D/s scenes are all about trust. Maybe that's why I like them lol. Anyway... wonderful chapter as always and I have to say... I am dying to know what role Gaara is going to play in all of this. I've even wondered if Sasuke is going to be left standing at the alter as Sakura runs off with Gaara!

That chapter was sooo good!!! My favorite line... 'Awake Sasuke was nowhere near as cute as sleeping Sasuke.' I admit... I found that totally funny. I loved the whole honeymoon suite scene that Naruto planned out too. It had so many different parts to it... and Naruto took it slow and worked to make it so special for Sasuke. But I think my favorite part there was when Sasuke admitted that he had never topped and his fantasy was to top Naruto... and only Naruto and Naruto responded "I love you too." That was sooo sweet!!!!

Really awesome chapter.

Yes! anther long chapter! Wow I just love the way your write so much. I love how you write Naruto and Sasuke. the way they interact and your sex scene are SO HAWT! I love the way this fic is going. Keep up the Great work ^_^

oooohhhhh.... that was just... just... really really wonderful!!!!!!

I loved everything about this chapter!!! I liked Gaara being introduced as someone glaring at Sasuke... I adored that whole gym/locker room scene *fanning self* whoo hoo that was hot. Naruto being angry and Sasuke wanting everything from him including the anger... how Naruto took care of him afterwards... everything! And the very end when Sasuke said everything wasn't always about sex... ooohhhhh I just loved it!!!!

*le sigh* I want to know how this story ends. More, more, more!

:) the romeo and juliet quotes from Naruto were totally cute and I really liked how poleaxed Sasuke was when he realized Sakura was going to make her big announcement. I soooo hope she drives Sasuke crazy... fast... so he'll realize what an idiot he's being! Sigh... go Naruto... go Naruto... go Naruto... get Sasuke... get Sasuke... get Sasuke!

poor deluded Sasuke... doesn't know that his plan is guaranteed to make everyone miserable. Naruto though... I bet he's already planning how to get Sasuke to change his mind :)