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omg.
for the dj for the nightclub
you should make it Gaara.
lol.
please!!!!!
and make Sai his lover.
yea!


~Riku~

oh my.
well.
you got rid of the bitch.
but did u really have to end it there?
like that?
ugh!
update soon.
you evil, evil author.

~Riku~

Well... I pretty much agree with Stalker-san. The whole thing with Sakura was really too much. She came across like an entitled, spoiled brat before, not gun-toting crazy. Just felt OOC for her to go this far. (And yeah, the whole time during the confrontation, I kept waiting for Kiba to show up, especially after shots were fired. The bar can't be so big he couldn't have run there in time to prevent Naruko from being stabbed. What happened, did he freeze up?)

I think it would have worked better for me if they'd gotten critically injured in a more ordinary way, like if someone tried a closing-time robbery of the bar, or if they'd gotten mugged in the parking lot. (Didn't Naruko mention that most of the clubs are bad parts of town? Seems like crime is an issue for this universe.) If you wanted to kill off Sakura, you could have had her there and arguing with Sasuke and Naruko when the robbery/mugging/etc. happened. I could even see her going so far as to beg the robber/mugger/etc. not to shoot her and to shoot Naruko instead.

Oh my God this chapter broke my heart
I really love your story. I didn't comment before because I didn't know you could comment anon :/ I really hope Naruko and Sasuke will be okay! Damn Sakura >:(

OH MY GOD!!!! It started out so Hot and Smexy I loved it. Now all horrible. That crazy ass bitch, I can't believe she did that. I am glad she is dead. Where in the hell was Kiba? I hope they are going to be ok. It is too bad she is dead I would have loved to have seen her ass get thrown in jail and just fry there.

As I was reading this story I was thinking of the previous chapter and how I forgot to write in my review that during Naruko confrentation with Itachi I could so totally see Itachi with a man dressed as a woman. So I hope you'll write a story like that either a totally seperate from this story or maybe a sequel or something.

I totally loved this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

JJ

Wtf just happened? I thought Sakura had more humiliation lined up for her and then you lamely killed her off. Now Naruko might be dead and Sasuke sure isn't feeling too great. Ugh! Not Only that but I think Kiba should have done things a bit sooner, like tackle the bitch with a chair.

I am loving this story. This chapter just made me want to know even more who the bitch is that is married to Itachi. I feel compelled to know. I love the sex between Naruko & Sasuke, it made me reolise that I will miss Naruko's cock even it Sasuke doesn't. Awesome work keep it up. <3 HUGS!!!

I really like the way the story is going. Sas is so happy he's changing and even contemplating children!

Now this was a really good chapter. I am really glad that Sasuke made up with his family. And oh boy was that sex scene freaking hot, it was delicious. And that was a really sweet scene bout them having kids. I liked that and I am glad that everything is working out for them.

I totally love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

JJ

Wow that was kind of a twist of Naruto suddenly going through with surgery!!!! But I love this story non the less!!! I wonder what Fukaku will do when Naruto is Naruko? Can't wait for more!!!! See you again soon!!!