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OH MY GOD! Now that was Smexy scene, really kinky, now I am wondering what is in that toy box that Naruto mention. Can't wait for that chapter and I also can't wait for that dinner with the Uchihas. That should be interesting. And I love that scene in the jewelry store, that was a really sweet and touching scene. I really love this chapter. That really does sound like a beautiful ring.

I am just loving this story more and more. Can't wait for the next chapter.

JJ

YAY!!!! It sounds like a beautiful ring. The only thing that would have made it better is if Sasuke had gotten down on a nee and proposed for himself right in the store when he put the ring on Naruto but it was still awesome. I love these two. I am waiting for Sakura to be evil. Every chapter I am worried about it. Kepp up the awesome work. <3 HUGS!!!!!

i love the dress and the ring they sound lovely also this is the sweetest tale ihave read in some time

So I was right!!!! Uchiha are just attracted to Naruko!!! I hope Itachi tries everything to get the little blond! *Squirms in antisapation!*

Now this was a very sweet and touching chapter. Especially when Mikoto told her to caller her mom and when asked her to wear her wedding dress. And I know Itachi is going to be having fun messing around with his cute younger brother, I mean that is just something he would do. I think Naruto is going to be perfect for that that family. Now I can't wait for them to get married and now I am wondering how are Sasuke and Minato going to get along cause he still hasn't met the father of the "bride". And Sasuke's mom is pretty observant to have kinda guessed how Naruto really is.


Totally love this chapter and totally loving this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

JJ

Talk about a cliff hanger, now you got me all hot and I can't wait for them to get it on in Sasuke's bed and his father is just down stairs. I hope they lock the door. I am so glad that they are getting married. I got really excited reading this chapter. Now I am just wondering what that bitch Sakura is going to do now cause I know she is going to want to do something. She has no class at all.

I totally loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter. I mean I hate the waiting for the updates but they are so worth the wait. And I was wondering another thing, how in the hell do you pronounce S'uke. Someone sound it out for me PLEASE.

JJ

YAY dinner with the folks. Naruto is so cute. I am soooooo HAPPY that they are engaged. Keep up the awesome work. <3 HUGS!!!!

gods this tale is sweet got a tooth ache just from reading it. keep it up please. also very smooth flow.

Sakura's gonna try to fuck things up, isn't she? Reveal that Naruto's a guy? I kind of expected Sasuke to suddenly have a rival in his father. Or will Itachi try to steal Naruko away? Can't wait to see Itachi!!!

I just started reading this the other day, and so far I'm really enjoying the story. I was really excited to come across a story with a trans character. But I'm not sure about how she's being represented, mostly since chapter three. Being transgendered isn't a half and half thing, and it's not surgery that legitimizes a person's gender, but it seems that because Naruko still has male sex organs, she's not seen as the woman she is, but rather as a man in women's clothing. As soon as Sasuke found out, she and Naruko became he and Naruto. Although he considers the possibility of her being trans immediately, he doesn't seem to have much understanding of what it means to be trans. And Naruko's statement really caught me off guard. "I’m a guy that likes to dress up as a girl" ...that's crossdressing - which is totally fine, except that crossdressing is not synonymous with transgenderism/transsexualism, which translate to "I'm a girl with the biological parts of a guy." And if Naruko is on hormones, I would think she'd have a somewhat firmer grasp on her gender identity. One cannot just go out and buy hormones, they need to have them prescribed. A psychologist wouldn't have started her on hormone therapy if she just enjoyed dressing up as a girl and wasn't sure she was a woman. That said, Naruko doesn't have to identify within the traditional gender binary either, but this doesn't seem to be the case for her. Besides the one odd comment, Naruko seems incredibly comfortable and sure of herself in her gender, her physical sex and her presentation.

So...I suppose I just feel a lack of clarity and consistency around Naruko's gender identity and how it's being interpreted both by her and by Sasuke. I don't mean to get all nitpicky about a fictional representation of a fictional character xD But besides being a real issue outside of fic, it is a rather central element in the story, so I felt it was a reasonable thing to bring up.

But like I said, the story has been great so far, and I hope I wasn't discouraging, as I can't wait to keep reading.