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for Just One More Kiss

by yolotengo

schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, now that was a HOT and SEXY scene in the closet. I am so lovig this story. And I hope that Sasuke does something soon to know his bastard of a father off his pedestal. God I hate that asshole, actually condoning his "fiance" to have him followed. I want want them both to go down HARD. And I just don't like the fact that Fugaku is going to get what he wants, you know a merger, if he says yes to Sasuke and Naruko getting married. Call me crazy and selfish but I just don't want him to win at anything. He doesn't deserve it.

Well I am loving this story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

JJ
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
gods i love your writing your one of my favorit writers on here i just finished you rape fic when i saw this one had updated btw coming back to ones self after being raped or molested from that young is one of the hardest thing a servivor has to do i should know and you showed just how hard it is thank you
person angelj232000
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
They totally are sole mates. Who is Itachi married to? Why does their father have them both marrying bitches? Their mother could not have been that bad to their father. Next chapter please. <3 HUGS!!!!
person smint45
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so HOT!!!! I totally loved it!!!
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God, I totally loved this chapter. I mean I love the HOT Smexy scenes, but I also love when there are tender moments as well. That there is more to their relationship then just fucking. Now I am starting to wonder who Itachi is married to, too. And if she is such a bitch too I hope that there is a way for Sasuke to help him. Now I can't wait for that meeting between Minato and the asshole, I hope it works out.

Loving it and I can't wait for the next chapter.

JJ
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooooohhhhh.... this is going to be so good!!! awesome first chapter...Sasuke is soooo going to freak!
person angelj232000
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! I love this story. I don't want anything bad to happen to Sasuke & Naruto but problem will make them stronger. I love how you had Sasuke okay with Naruto. When I first read the 1st chapter I thought that Naruto was going to take advantage of Sasuke, but I am so glad that you did not go that root. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work. <3 HUGS!!!!!
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love this tale its cute and funny keep it up
person angelj232000
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to hear what Naruto's dad's offer is going to be. I want them together so bad. I know Sakura will do something bitchy. I always like to when authors make her the heal. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. <3 HUGS!!!!
person smint45
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh they are so in love with eachother it is so sweet!!! I totally love it!!! Hope Minato will be able to work things out for the two!!!! See you again soon!!!