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for My Saving Grace

by EarthandWater

person oronochi
schedule December 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful story! I love how you have managed to capture the essence of Itachi and Neji -- and they are so hot together. It's a rare pairing that definitely needs more fics! -- and everyone else. I can't wait to see how the rest of the group reacts to Neji, and if Tobi and Neji get into the argument sooner than expected. I'm a real fan of happy endings, so I can't wait to see how the story will continue to develop. I'll be eagerly awaiting your next chapter. :)
person buckwild
schedule November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Totally cute so far. I feel bad for Itachi but love that walking wetdream ;p, Gaara seems like a dick and I'm half hoping half dreading that he might pull a dick move in the up coming chapters, Sasuke is funny as hell and Naruto is the rock. And Neji is my favoite :)
schedule November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh I'm enjoying Neji and Itachi's experience a whole lot morenow that they seem to be out of the awkwardness. Touching even!x3
Sasuke was extremely funny worrying over what Naruto had full control over. Itachi's 'you're an idiot' look was priceless. I just love the way you write them!!
When Neji and Itachi were in the club, I just KNEW they'd make it to the couch at least, and do some heavy necking but was surprised nonetheless with Sasuke's call. I really love their domestic bliss.
schedule November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really wonderful bittersweet story and I really feel for Itachi's circumstances. I love that Naruto and Sasuke are married with a baby and they all interact with one another. I love the way Neji plays hard to get and is so transparent about it.x3. I also like the pairing. I'm so excited for them both to find love with eachother.
person Sassy
schedule November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this story over at Y!Gal and it is just as good the second time around. Keep up the good work girls.
person Sassy
schedule November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the description of the flea market. They way the two of you write it, it is almost like being in the middle of it. Still enjoying it as much as the first time around. Thank you for posting it here too.