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for Tangled in the Tinsel

by TheSimi

schedule December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well that was awesome, I loved how they said it was one of the worst kept secrets the fact that everyone knew about it and I loved the little game between Sasuke and Itachi trying to make each other jealous and stuff. I loved the whole tensil thing and I found 'Moses' a little hilarius.

CrimsonWatersAlien
schedule November 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg.
that last bit was amazing.
fu just walking in on Naruto and Pein.
lol.
i love it.
and the sex was just right.
i cant wait to read more from you.
make another soon.
XD.

~Golden Kitsune~
schedule November 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you evil twisted writer i have had a green glowing toy in years past but a blue is hard to find
schedule November 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful! Thanks so much for posting! Just in time for the holidays too ;)