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December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Serani please please please write more of this story soon! It's fantastic!
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March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fic!! It's so delicious.. I can't wait until the next part! If it's not too much trouble, could you let me know when you update?? ^^;;
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February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
what to do? I say dance and flirt whoo hoo! :)
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February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter! Naruto/Kiba is a fun pairing, especially with the way you portray them here. Please updat soon!
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February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol I loved how they were both clueless about the other wanting them and as more than a fling. Please update again soon! ^__^
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February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!
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February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOL they were beating off to each other in adjoining rooms! How's that for irony?!
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January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really lovely. You rarely see this pairing done with such great sense of the two characters. Even though it's AU/AR, I don't mind at all, even though I usually tend to favour fics that are at least loosely canon. It would have been wonderful if the setting had been Japan instead of the US, but I guess it's better to use a place or system you know, instead of struggling with something you aren't quite familiar with. I hope Sasuke will turn up to cause some trouble (even if only as a friend), though I'm sure you have something quite fitting planned out to cause Kiba and Naruto some difficulties even if it's not in the form of Sasuke. It's rather obvious that Kiba and Naruto are quite troublesome by themselves, so not much is needed, after all. I really enjoyed getting both POVs because they were so well done, so I hope you'll continue writing in this way. Sometimes switching POVs can be slightly irritating, but you make Naruto and Kiba both such likeable characters that I couldn't help but like it. Besides, I didn't feel like it was revealing too much or hindering the storytelling in any way, just the opposite. I hope you'll have time to write the next chapter soon because I'm just itching to know more. :-)
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December 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story ;) I can't wait to see next chapter ;)
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December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like how this is starting out. I've always liked Kiba's character... he's like a rougher version of Naruto.I really liked that part where Kiba said that Naruto would probably get sick of him first. Like that's happened to him many times... I'm rooting for KIBA! :)