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woah... busted... well, almost. >>

I liked this story a lot and I love how you having their clans warring and they don't care, they just want to have fun. I really hope there will be more, great writing!

Good start to this. I like the whole warring clans thing and how they both like the thrill of having the affair anyway, rather than having major hangups about it. (Poor bored vamps.) Of course I'm also looking forward to them getting into some trouble over this. (There is going to be more, right? I was confused because in the description you listed this as both a oneshot and a WIP...) Oh, and by the way, totally LOL'd when Mikoto caught them. Was SO expecting it to be Itachi, and for him to make some predictably urbane/flirtatious comment to Naruto, but Mikoto was way better. :D