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for Sin

by kiyasama

person sadie237
schedule June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm choked up typing this:) Happy and sad all rolled into one! Happy because it almost over and the boys can be together!! Sad because there were so many losed plus Sasuke's not there yet! Hey I have a screener of Kakashi carrying Naruto on his back. So I really enjoyed read it in your story. That was such a touching moment. Naruto was beat to with in a inch of his life. But still he pulled his head up and talked sh*t to old Danzo I loved that:) Then when he seen Jiraiya and the tears stated falling for him that had me going to:) I'm sorry my thoughts are all over the place:) It was so exciting!!! Wonderful Babygirl!! ^_^
schedule June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please let there be weddings. naruto and sasuke need each other. and I will be sad when this story ends.and will narusasu smooch in public when they see each other. well buy for now.
person sadie237
schedule May 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WoW!!! Yes that was intense! Hearing O's sad story of his childhood. All the sad crazy things he did in the name of science. What he had done to his own body! If they was ever a definition of 'Mad Man' it's should read Orochimaru. Your title is so dead on the money:) Poor Sasuke to hear all the crazy stuff that happen to his family. I was proud of Sasuke for walking away and not killing O. So in my mind when he did kill Orochimaru. He had to. I hope that would ease his mind later on. Babygirl that was an awesome chapter:) I loved it! ^_^
person satterb
schedule May 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gaaauuuuuggghhh! What is this madness?! Thank you so very much for updating. I was surprised and a little happy to see that Haku was able to end Kimmimaro. I can't wait to see what's happening on Naruto's end, and to find out what's happened to Sasuke and Orochimaru. Please update soon, as I'm excited to read more. I will miss this story when it's over :(
person sadie237
schedule May 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! What a cliffy that was!!:) You're still the bomb Babygirl. That hole chapter was action packed! I thought Naruto's was full of action but you stepped it up a couple of notches:) WoW! I was scared when I read there wont be any happily ever after. Now I see why. Haku Kiba Suigetsu Kimimaro and Jugo. I'm hoping 3 out of 4 might make it?! Most of all I'm hoping Sasuke is going to be alright?! The way you described Orchimaru was incredible I could see that sicken smile of his.(shiver) Hey I could visualize the hold bloody mess that was happening! You're good with your bad self:) I'm so hooked on your story it worst than drugs!!!! ^_^
person satterb
schedule May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I have missed this story soooo much. I read and re-read this update which explains the delay in reviewing. I'm glad Naruto could do what he had to do and not beat himself up too much over being unfaithful to Sasuke. I really can't wait to see these two together again, but not looking forward to seeing this story come to an end. I look forward to the next update. Take care.
person sadie237
schedule May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Babygirl you were on point with this action packed chapter! From stared to finish it was so intense wOw!! I loved it!!! Naruto had to do everything he did. Sasuke will understand sense the guy is dead now. Which might be the only reason he'll understand:) The two ninjas working with Shika was oh so cool. I just loved it all ^_^
schedule May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
your back(applause and a room full of screaming yaoi fangirls). this chapter made the long wait worth it. but about that naruto sasuke comment about them not being together is sacrilege. they are together or die in each others arms while confessing their eternal love.and give haku a boyfriend( he needs one). and please have the pedophile( aka orochimaru) have a bloody and violent death at that hands of everyone he victimized. meaning no quick death.
other then that please update sooner then last time. peace
person Naiika
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Whew! I've FINALLY made it through the story so far! I sure hope you are still writing this. I love the character development, and the pulling in of so many characters you only see in a few episodes, and give them a new life. I like where you've taken Sasuke and Naruto. I really hope you have a good plan for sweet Haku, he has always been one of my favorites.
person satterb
schedule March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on passing your exam! I am phlebotomist, and would NEVER want to be a nurse! LOL so good luck to you! (I think it is too demanding and too thankless, so I have all the respect in the world for you) I will wait for you as long as it takes to see this story to it's glorious end. Many times I have thought about you and I feel bad that I didn't take the time to send a note through review to cheer you on. Thank you so much for not forgetting about us, but I didn't think you would because this is clearly a labor of love. There's just too much heart, soul and blood poured in to think you could ever leave it. Real life sometimes gets in the way, so just take your time and do what you need to do to get back in the proverbial saddle. Love you and look forward to more.