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chapter 1-11. Wow! Considering that the content of the story was written with a PG rating, it is beautifully written. Love how the story flowed and kept the reader reading. Wonderful and superb.

how cool
keep up the great writing
looking forward to more

I think I reviewed once before on the main story, but I have to again. Your stories are amazing. The more I read, the more in love with your characters I am. I may end up having to read the entire series through all over again, that's how much I love it.

The universe they're in is so rich and fleshed out, it's insane. It really is. Your version of Shikamaru is the most heartbreaking and compelling, for me, and Shika has never been one of my favorite characters before. Even the plight of the hybrids doesn't get me like the concept of a genuis so far removed from the common people that stability is a miracle and healthy relationships are practically a fairy tale.

I've read a LOT of fanfic and I can honestly say that out of everything I've ever read, yours is the first that has ever followed me into my friggin' dreams. I'm beyond excited for the next installment and hope that the story has started coming a little easier, so I can get it sooner xD I can wait if I have to, though.

Thankyou mannah for making this idea a reality, I look forward to reading more from you in the future, you took a rough idea of mine and made a diamond nobody could have done this better than you. Your friend Death

ohoho no it's alredy finish !! but leadre will come soon. I am really looking forward your new story, i really love your work. I am so sad to know all your work was weap out but i hope they will be poste soon again but i regulary red them !! love your work thank you !!

Thank you for writing this amazing story! It keeps me coming back for more and I am really looking forward to see what will happen to Haru next.

You are a very talented author! Normally, I am not that interested in SciFi stories, but the world you created is intriguing.

Good luck for writing 'Leader'!

oh, awesome! Sai is going to be a major player i can see this now. And Klenn's gift, fantastic, just fantastic. I really loved this little foray into the kids world. It was completely fascinating. ty for bringing it to us.

OMG your chapter did this wall-to-wall thing. Mine did it too. You need to copy them to txt and then back to AFF.... It's a pain, I know...

That chapter and ending was great! It was so cool that you managed to keep it at the stage where it is not resolving the case. Sai will survive and Klenn is ... amazing. I hope that "The Leader" doesn't start with him dead... I would miss him so much. And who will be the Leader? Does the title refer to Sasuke or one of the children? ... I can't believe I will have to wait untill April to find out....

I don't know what to say at the end...
I guess the most important is that I love your writing . It's great and addictive. I can't wait for more. When you informed me about this story being 'in the making' I had no idea that it will suck me in too. I thought it would be something that I will have to read on the side. But it was surprisingly engrosing.
I really loved it.
As always THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH for sharing the story and for always continuing, without fail, for updating so regularry and so often!
You are my favorite ff writer! and I hope you'll never stop creating those new worlds, chaaracters and stories.
Keep going! We can't wait for the Leader!!!

Thank you for the great adventures! I'll read you in April:) Of course I'm hoping sooner ^_^

whew.. that was a close call for Sai!! LOL So Imma taking it he a nice guy!! Very nice... a bit fast but good!! Thank you!!! See ya next chappy!!!