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(Ch 2) What fun! I think Sai is a sentient lifeform generated by the computer. Or maybe a spy who snuck his avatar into the system. Why isn't anyone worried? Everyone assumes it was Shicka, Sumiko or Hath. We know it wasn't Haru... Intriguing!

Oh man oh man! XDD

I can just imagine Haru's expression at the end! OH NO CHILDREN.

-kicking himself laughing-

Also yes, I did get the email and I'm working on prelimanary sketches and stuff. c:
It's okay I ping you WIP's and stuff to check details, right?

wow. i never even thought of sai featuring. this is going to be interesting. winces on haru's behalf. for a kid whose physically younger than the rest, haru sure does have a lot more responsibilities put on him. old soul in a young body i think. snickers. those last to lines were great. Haru was so very ... er... thanks. should be fun seeing how he copes.
I never even thought of triggered behaviors with the kits. what a scary thought as it leaves them so much more open to abuse and the snake freak is still out there somewhere. at least they're well supported. the hybrid trio, will they have triggered behaviors too. so many possibilities to play with. ^^

I'm very glad to see you post this story!
I love Haru very much (and that is rare for OC)
Welcome back! :)

The person on the house already is intriguing.

Yay!!!! New story. I like the idea of a Haru centric story. Can't wait for more. Keep up the awesome work HUGS!!!!. PS It is great to see you back hope you had a good break.

They are all so cute and I'm happy that you are back. :-D

wb. having said that i'd like to say, wow, the litter is awesome. I love the way they check and balance each other without losing what makes them them. i also love the way naru and sas interact with them. how if something is causing a prob or not working, they tweak it till it does.
on the mysterious boy, I'm soooooooo betting it's sumi's interactive 'friend'. I feel sorry for her a bit. it's no fun being the odd one out. I'm glad her big bro is there to help.

Your back!! Your back!! *dancing* AND you brought us a tale of Haru and the children!! I'm so excited to read the coming chapters!! I love reading about the children and Haru by far is the most intriguing so its going to be so much fun seeing him interact with the litter, his family and Ran :) I should also mention that its not every author than can say their writing a story about nine year olds and have their fans jumping for joy, so take a bow, I can hear the cheering and clapping already :)

whoah you are back, I am so happy!! it's a wonderfull christmas gift!! i just finished reading iteration last night again and i saw this sequel great. Haru is a very complex character,it's interresting to know is point of viw. love this story !! se you next sathurday

glad you're back. can'y wait to get deeper into this story