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person roro237
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First I missed you! I was like the kits I missed you but was excited that you were working on something that was coming soon:) And it was wonderful!! I enjoy this in Ha-chan point of view ^_^
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It's so great to see you really are back to wriing! This side story is nice but I hope i doesn't mean that there will be no more Naru x Sasu....
So... an 'imaginary friend' is living in the simulator? Who had put him there? Shika to please his sister or maybe she did i all by herself? Are Nara's genes always so brilliant?
Can't wait to see.
Thank you for sharing!!!
person cynaga
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! What a treat it was to read the first chapter of this new story! I am very curious about Sumiko's new digital friend...
person morlana
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As always the chapter was brought to life and I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for continuing the saga at pint height, I look forward to where ever you take us.
person Kyle
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am incredibly intrigued and I'm excited by this. Adult or not I love reading about this universe you have so lovingly created. On that note, I was looking to do some fanart, particularly of all the kits. However...It turns out other than the birthing scene, which is difficult because you have to flick between that and the next chapter and the kits might have grown differently ANYWAY you don't physically describe them much. If it's possible, could I get a description of...well, everyone! Whatever standard-age (like, give me the ages of everyone please) you feel would be most appropriate to do a big family picture. And I mean everyone! Whoever you think would be in the family/crew picture. c:
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New stuff! It's like Christmas again!

And all about Haru! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!