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(Ch 8) you are such a wonderful story teller,Mannah! :) I enjoy your work so much.

I really can't express how much I love this story!

This is becoming so interesting, it looks like Haru, at the age of three, created artificial intelligence...I'm interested to know if he's going to come clean with the adults before the end of the storyline or if it will become a story within a story when you start up the trilogy again? So may questions, knowing what we know about Haru, he must have wanted to save the quiggle that did not attack without provocation so maybe that's why its in the data array and also why he named it. I also wonder how the adults will react. Only a couple chapters left and I have no idea what will happen next, I can't wait until the next chapter.:)

oho haru has got his first lesson, darrent san has foiund a way to help haru. love this story !!

Well, I guess that sort of solves the mortality problem for Klennethon Darrent (and maybe even Naruto) if they are willing to pay the price. (Naruto is such a physical being, he probably wouldn't want to be an electronic intelligence, but would he do it for his family? And how is physicality in a simulation different from real life? Hmmm.) You've already covinced us that sentient, empathetic life that evolves mechanically has merit like life that evolves biologically. Uchiha and Klennethon Darrent don't seem to be subject to any laws, except to the extent they consent to them, so I guess they can do whatever they want with respect to artificial intelligence. Good story!

You already know how much I love To-chan and Papa but it just keeps on growing:) To raise 13 kids and give them space to grow into their own person plus let them have fun to! I had one hell of a time with 2!!:) Thank goodness Ha-chan found the answer he was looking for. I loved today's adventure. I stay on the fence with Klenn but if Ha-chan can see him for what he is. I'll let it go just like Papa ^_^

Loved the last 2 chaps!!! :) Even tho I didn't really understand all it was still easily imaginative...:) Thank you!!

It is nice to see how much he has developed and I'm haveing visions of a threesome again. I think we all now what we believe which name the file has.

I'm totally hooked on this story :)
It's so weird - usually OC don't catch my attention, but this verse Haru just grabs my heart.

Quigglicidal? That kid is just too smart for his own good.