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by mannahpierce

person richon
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ohoh sai can be dangerous!! but he has good intention, it's difficult for haru to decide what to do? what name is it ? love this story !! see you soon
person Kyle
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
..oAo

Haru created artificial intelligence at...three.

I am impressed.

also worried.
person Fluister
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahw, poor Haru. He really is too wise (and at the same time, not at all) for his age. Trying to sort everything out by himself. I love how Iruka is trying to make him see how Shika still blames himself, but I think Haru already has that (unreasonable) sense of responsibility that Shika has as well.

Love the story so far, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So it was Haru after all! I must say I'm proud of him! Even thoug I think that it may case one hell of a mess... He should tell Shika... I wonder if he will ar will this whole story finish without he knowledge of any grown-ups....

THANKS FOR UPDATE!
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh cliffhanger of doom how i loath thee
person roro237
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing ^_^
person cynaga
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 Way cool!!!
person angelj232000
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have really been enjoying this fic. I like knowing more about Haru & his interaction with people. I like that Haru has deeper feelings for Ran. I like seeing lots of Iruke. I definately think that Haru created Sai. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keepup the awesome work. HUGS!!!!! <3
person lonelylulaby
schedule January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, I dont know why but I was scared for a minute. I'm thinking Haru would rather be a supertronny then have his siblings grow up without him and watch them all change. I cry a little inside for Haru, he missed out on SO much. I liked the Tronny story alot, I didn't see how they were baddies, they helped the human race. But I guess we will find out in the later chapters. Oh Man!!!! too excited for next Saturday.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule January 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow, there was just so much stuff packed into that chappie it's hard to pick a starting point. so many over and under tones and haru noticing at least half of them was very interesting. Hoshi's right, Klenn is not a nice man.
have all the kits partnered wish someone? Is it part of their altered behaviour? that's going to be scary cause those they look to will have to watch themselves very carefully.
I like that hi admitted to what he'd done but really, he shouldn've known that Haru doesn't think like that.
it is an interesting question, what would Sas have done if he wsan't born uchiah.
I look forward to finding out what Sai actually is... eventually. :P