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person v
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Tronnies? What are Tronnies? I don't remember Tronnies?? Now this has really gotten interesting...if Sai is a data-crystal array...and no one knows about him but Haru and Ran...then...I have no idea whats going to happen next!! lol..but it is a little sad that Kazuki doesnt' spend as much time with Haru, being so used to thinking of the children as the "litter" and then the "big litter", now that they're growing up it stands to reason their interests would be different, *sniffle*...I hope they don't grow to much apart. Another great chapter!! Looking forward to the next one! :)
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OK, Tronnies? Should I remember that? I'm sorry but I don't... unfortunately.....
Now I'm curious....

Is Kazuki keeping away from Haru because he hinks he might be a berserker??????
I wish there was more Kazuki in he story. He's cute.
person cynaga
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(Ch 5) I really enjoy the interactions between Haru and Naruto. I love Sai's line about changing his own program but it was always there. I feel the same!
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
uiyuiyuiyui who are the tronnies?

totally random: I believe that Ka-chan will be very funny once he will hit puberty :-)
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*ears perk up. what's a Tronnie? I wonder if Sai will get a physical form eventually... that'd be cool.
person roro237
schedule January 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A level 5 genius is to much! The way his mind was working was down right scary! Actually the real genius is YOU!! How in the name of heaven do you do it?! I read every word and it all makes sense. To-chan was wonderful. He knew went to ask and when to back off. I love him so:) Ran went on a family outing! I'm so glad for Iruke-sensei. Thank you for sharing another incredible adventure ^_^
person angelj232000
schedule January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying the direction that the story is taking. I don't find Haru anywhere near as annoying or bratty as before. I like that he is interacting with a lot of the other characters. I can''t wait to see what happens next. Keep up the awesome work. <3 HUGS!!!!!
person v
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was such a fun chapter :) Who knew that Te-chan and Ta-chan were evil and Haru would be the one to call them on it! LOL. I'm very curious about Sai also, but I think that the best part was Iruka's conversation with Haru...Its easy to forget how important he was to the growth and well being of most of the adults when you get caught up in his relationship with Ran and Kakashi so this was a lovely reminder of who he is and what he can mean to the people he loves. Loved it! :)
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
halllllo artificial intelligence. i thought so. this is going to cause problems.
schedule January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Maybe Sai is a A.I. that is developing on it's own and will learn emotions like the Manga one later. I'm waiting for the nicknames to start that might be not so child friendly ;-)