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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
now that is very interesting. if sue chan did the vr makeover that's impressive but why would she send the sai fairy out on a mission. if she didn't could it have been sai himself? No matter if it was su or sai, either way is going to raise some very interesting possibilities. that is something that needs a close eye kept on it.
Well, done Haru. for a weak link, he wasn't very. ^^
I like the way haru handled those girls too. the point needs to be hammered home that when they are irresponsible with dangerous stuff, ppl can be hurt or killed. I don't think they'll forget that any time soon.
Well, done Haru. for a weak link, he wasn't very. ^^
I like the way haru handled those girls too. the point needs to be hammered home that when they are irresponsible with dangerous stuff, ppl can be hurt or killed. I don't think they'll forget that any time soon.
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Iruka... taking care of Shika and then Sasuke was probably the most challenging and tireing task in his life so far and now he must take care (kind of SAVE from himself...) the brillinat mix of both of them!!! HA! he needs to save another sleepyhead genius... cute. Good luck Iruka! He will surely have some good influence on Haru. I can't wait for more interaction between the two of them. It's a shame that I haven't thought of it before! It's so perfect. I just wonder what role will Iruka ake. He was kind of a...'parent figure' for Sasuke, giving him warmth that he missed. For Shika he was some one who (a least I see it that way) who had taught him the 'normal human' stuff. He grounded him in the normal life.
I wonder what will he be for Haru. What does Haru need? If a teacher than is Iruka smart enough????
This story pulls me in....
Thank you for updating!
I wonder what will he be for Haru. What does Haru need? If a teacher than is Iruka smart enough????
This story pulls me in....
Thank you for updating!
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hoho the 2 demons girls nearly kill their brother and the other children. haru and ran did the right thing. Sumiko may be a type 7 ou type 5 too. haru will discover soon. Love this story !! see you soon
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've not been waiting excitedly all day for this to update
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why do you ask?
*innocent whistle*
Is sumiko doing it or is it something/someone else?
Perhaps the data crystal array Haru installed that is never doing what it should?
If sumiko is doing it...why is nobody aware she's so clever?
Surely if Shika is monitoring the program, he'd be aware it's not Haru is changing it?
So manyquestions.
BE SUNDAY ALREADY -shot-
Thanks again for writing these Mannah. c:
I really really enjoy them.
I hope Wallflower is updated soon too.
..
why do you ask?
*innocent whistle*
Is sumiko doing it or is it something/someone else?
Perhaps the data crystal array Haru installed that is never doing what it should?
If sumiko is doing it...why is nobody aware she's so clever?
Surely if Shika is monitoring the program, he'd be aware it's not Haru is changing it?
So manyquestions.
BE SUNDAY ALREADY -shot-
Thanks again for writing these Mannah. c:
I really really enjoy them.
I hope Wallflower is updated soon too.
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I did the old belly laugh when Haru-chan ask Kazuki to stay and help with the girls and got the look:) I would have never guessed the girls were little terrors now:) Haru is growing up before my very eyes. Tsu-chan my little sweetie feel better soon! I enjoyed the mission. You're still so incredible with all kinds of action going on in a chapter:) Iruke-sensei to the parents and now to the children wonderful. Queenie thank you for Wednesdays and Saturdays. I had a sparkle in my eye on the way home from work today ^_^
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
He never thought that she could be a genius? ;-) His cute little male ego will take a hard blow if she will become as intelligent as Shika :-) I can so see that :-)
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonder when this will hit the fan. Shika should find renewed interest in his sister, else she might have fairies running around the household. The mission was well written, even had me holding my breath at the outcome!
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Looks like the only thing standing between certain frilly little Uchiha girls and world domination is Haru.
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January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The sex alk, huh? Not bad! Naruto and Sasuke did well. I loved that Sasuke is still so weird about girls. He's cute like that. It's worth to read this side story even if just for this one moment. It was brilliant. Haru just couldn't find a worse person in the whole univerce to ask about girls' body parts......
Too bad that Haru is into Ran after all. I was hoping he would bond with Kazuki!
I liked it! This chapter was really fun to read.
And I'm EXTAIC that you have a title for the third part of the triology, because it means that you really are thinking and working on it! You have no idea how happy I am now!
Thank you!
Too bad that Haru is into Ran after all. I was hoping he would bond with Kazuki!
I liked it! This chapter was really fun to read.
And I'm EXTAIC that you have a title for the third part of the triology, because it means that you really are thinking and working on it! You have no idea how happy I am now!
Thank you!
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January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I see a Threesome in the future. I might be crazy but I see it and I'm happy about it aslong as it lasts :-)