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that was an awesome story. it was kind of sad yet there was a happy ending. it was realy well written. i think i would read this story again. it was that good.

This.Is.The.Best.Fanfic.I.Have.Ever.Read.EVER!
You have no clue how thrilled I am to have read it!
I loved the concept of a "new" Naruto. He was pretty badass while he lasted. Oturan had an amazingly unique image and I loved everything about it.
I loved Naru and Sasu's baby SO much. I am also very "content" with Sakura and Sai being the enemies(traitors?) I hate Sakura and Sai just kinda fits the whole "rape-y torture image."
I would absolutely be delighted if you wrote another fic where Naruto takes on a different "persona". I would be more than happy to read it if you did.
Please keep writing!

Hmm, I was kind of hoping for a lemon! And for Takeo to call Sasuke dad or something. Would have been cute! Ah well, regardless, it was a good story!

Wow this story was absoloutly amazing!!! I totally loved it!!! Thank you so much for sharing!!!!

This was a great story very well written, the only thing i will say is that i wish there was a part where Takeo called Sasuke daddy or papa or something that would have been cute but other then that this was a great story thank you :)

Hate her hate her hate her... Sakura is so awful. I'm glad Sasuke was the one to kill Sai. I also liked that whole scene with Gaara. I do so like Gaara even though I am a big SasuNaru fan lol. I thought it was really cute how Naruto was confused about his son recognizing him even though he looks like himself. He didn't have a clue lol.

Wow, Sasuke really beat the crap out of Sai! Oh well, he deserved it! I'm excited to see what happens to Sakura! Kiba and Sasuke are going to go on a rampage. Tsunade too! The scene with Gaara and Naruto was cute. Although Naruto is better off with Sasuke anyway XD Hmm, and yeah, I definitely think that Takeo is Sasuke's kid anyway!

That was soooo wonderful!!! It made so much sense that it was Sakura wanting to get rid of Naruto then because of the baby. That totally never occurred to me... I do like how you can surprise me. And I'm glad that neither of them will be the ones to kill Sakura but she will still be executed. If she had only been put in prison I wouldn't have trusted that she wouldn't get out. I also like how the ending had a balance to it... how Sasuke said that they were even. That was really good... I like symmetry lol.

I'm glad it's Sasuke that's going to take care of Sai... it would hurt Naruto in the long run and he just got his memories back. But where was Gaara? He was with Naruto at first when he went after Sai in town but then where did he go? And good for you Kiba... make sure Sakura doesn't get any warning and get away. So needs to be ruined for her part in this. Though I don't think Naruto could handle her being killed.

Earlier in the story Naruto said that he never believed that his rapist was Takeo's father. Was that just what he wanted to believe or was it because the baby was born in 8 months? It would, of course, be 9 months if he were already pregnant prior to the rape. If he had a test done to confirm the pregnancy that would also explain Sakura. I could see her biding her time and just waiting for the day that Sasuke tossed Naruto aside because he had to re-establish his clan. But if she found out he was pregnant - and she would because she works at the hospital or Naruto might have told his friend and teammate about the 'surprise' he had for Sasuke - then she would have had to accept that her dreams (obsessions) were going up in smoke and force her into action.

Regardless... AWESOME! Looking foward to the next chapter, thank you for updating, and hope things get better for you.