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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That... was so... awesome!!! I loved when Naruto's son said 'ma sheep' that was so perfect.Loving this story a lot :)
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January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*doing a happy dance and singing* Sasuke's son... Sasuke's son... Sasuke's son :)
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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Now I understand the title of the story. I can't say I figured it up until after reading the last chapter.
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely loving this story so far and really looking foward to the rest! Are you aware that you changed the color of Takeo's eyes? I only ask because I did not know if it were a choice or a mistake. It does lead to the question of who is the father... Sasuke or Sai? I personally would prefer it to be Sasuke - just because it would suck for Naruto to have to kill the father of his child.
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol what a way to wake up a person. A swift kick to the head leaves no false impressions. I really like this story.
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omgosh I loved those chapters... and 2! yeah!!!
I loved when Naruto's son kicked Sai in the head as hard as he could. Priceless. It would be just like Gaara to not believe that Naruto was dead and to keep looking for him. And I so didn't realize about the name!!!!!
This was so awesome. I love how the story progresses each time. Sai you just wait.
I loved when Naruto's son kicked Sai in the head as hard as he could. Priceless. It would be just like Gaara to not believe that Naruto was dead and to keep looking for him. And I so didn't realize about the name!!!!!
This was so awesome. I love how the story progresses each time. Sai you just wait.
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January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
when I started reading this I couldn't decide if I liked it or not. All I knew was that it was interesting. Now that I know that it was sai that hurt naruto and not sasuke like I thought it would have been and was one of my main reasons for not exactly liking it I have decided that its a good story. Very interesting concept and I can't wait to see how it all pans out. I also like naruto new identity though I'd still like to see him regain some of his memories and a little of his former self
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January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
aaarrrgggg!!!! You stopped there!!! There!!!! I want... no... need more!!! *bouncing up and down excited*
GLAD Naruto dislikes Sai. Sai being eaten by a demon sounds nice... but actually I'd love to see Naruto and/or Sasuke beat the sh*t out of him. *fingers crossed* 'Sai is not the father... Sai is not the father...
I love how this story is going! Kakashi getting teased about his size was funny too :)
I think Sasuke and Sai will probably put it together first before Naruto because of course they have their memories of Naruto to compare with. I wonder if Kyuubi still talks to Naruto or if that is no longer possible with the merge because then he could have done something to Sai but he doesn't seem to have that memory (which is actually good in my opinion because that would be horrible for him to remember now).
Happy thoughts sent to you hoping you are inspired to write more soon!
GLAD Naruto dislikes Sai. Sai being eaten by a demon sounds nice... but actually I'd love to see Naruto and/or Sasuke beat the sh*t out of him. *fingers crossed* 'Sai is not the father... Sai is not the father...
I love how this story is going! Kakashi getting teased about his size was funny too :)
I think Sasuke and Sai will probably put it together first before Naruto because of course they have their memories of Naruto to compare with. I wonder if Kyuubi still talks to Naruto or if that is no longer possible with the merge because then he could have done something to Sai but he doesn't seem to have that memory (which is actually good in my opinion because that would be horrible for him to remember now).
Happy thoughts sent to you hoping you are inspired to write more soon!
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January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke that murdering piece of trash. I already cant stand him. So far so good though. I look forward to seeing what else happens.
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January 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ohhh... I love the clues!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now they need to know the time... 3 years ago!!!! And SAI!!! He will so need to pay for what he did. I am confused about something though. I thought Naruto himself was going to disappear and that it would be Kyuubi who would have possession of Naruto's body. Which would mean that he wouldn't have any of Naruto's habits. But it seems like he's still Naruto though without the memories. So is Kyuubi in control or Naruto (without a past?)
Really interesting!!
Really interesting!!