rate_review Reviews

this is a aweomse opening I would love to see more of this story :)

Whispers

You have to bring out more chapters for this story!!! The tears are already there and then it stopped!!! Talk about jumping up and down ready to demand more....waves arms in the air wildly!!! That would so be ME!!! Timber here aka HotAnimeGuys Fan lol have to find my book with my stupid passwords in it....because old people like me forget EVERYTHING....lol...T_T ...unless its written down....so sad but true.....lol....can't recall for the life of me what excuses I used when I was young and forgot things all the time....lol

I LOVE THE START OF THIS!!! LOVE IT!!!

THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR HARD WORK!!!

This was really great start!!! As long as you continue this is not a game I really would love to read more of this!!!! See you again!!!

OOhh this has a promise. I'd love to see more of it. Did sasuke get picked up by Orochimaru? or Itachi? Is he on the run from his his family? I hope you well wright more. ^_^

You must have psychic powers! How on earth could you have known that we ( I hope I won't be the only one ) would want, beg, demand that you continue this?!

And, I'm really glad to read that you are working on This is not a game. It's at the top of my "I-feverishly-check-every-day-for-an-update" list of fics.

I love you ( as an author,of course, nothing more), I am jealous of your talent, and I am impatient for new things from you,

Tweedleedee

very promising for an intro. won't be sharing my thoughts and ideas though, as i trust yours. good luck. i'll be expecting more from this.