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February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! That was HOT! Wow, just wow, for not having penetration they sure in the heck came close lol, whew but that was smexy as all get out, I LOVED it! hehe, and I love the fact that Sasuke is all commanding and so pervy and naughty lol, before and I am sure when they are not 'playing' he will be the polite sweet man he is lol and ow man even all horney and ready to explode Naruto's smexy but eager shyness turns Sasuke on and drives him nuts I love that too! I love when Sasuke cant control him self around Naruto, how odd is that huh? I love it when he is posesive, like the jealouse thingy with Kiba and was it mentioned before that Kiba lived with Naruto? I either missed it, or forgot it, ah well, but still love that Sasu is jealoud, and thank cripes Naruto is going to spill about his ex and Kabuto? Ok I should be suprised, Kabuto is perfect for the evil abusive or what ever he did to poor Naruto the bastard, but oddly enough I hadn't expected it to be him, should of but didn't, nice choice, again glad Naruto's going to spill the beans, if he is sort of kind of over it and wants to actually start a good relationship he should spill, its not too soon, most people tell others these things before getting into relationships so that there is no baggage or so that this person knows what sort of baggage you will be bringing into said relaionship, so as you might be able to tell I totally pscyed for the next chapter and cant wait, thanks for the awesome read, great chapter, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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February 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
They are so so hooott!! mah! i dunno what i was expecting when they got back to the penthouse but it wasn't so much smexiness. so that was a pleasant surprise lol. And naru being embarrassed by liking the enema was too cute, though i still judge you naru bc yes it is gross LOL lucky for him i'm not sasuke :p And of course oooo it was Kabuto, of course. You sick bastard what did you do to naru that could possibly scare sasuke away! hmph!
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February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. Naruto & Sasuke are so cute together even when they are doing dirty things. I love the way their relationship is progressing. Naruto is so going to be living with Sasuke soon. I am very curious as to the basteredness of Itachi as the story goes. Keep up the awesome work!!!!! HUGS!!!!<3
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February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting so far! and well written. I think all the D/s stories i've read prev have all been strictly like sexual, one that deals with the relationship and getting into the whole thing is very different and intriguing
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February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LMAO Did he really say 'Im sure your asshole is pleasant'?? lolololol that cracked me the hell up, so formal for such an off key comment it was hilarious dwl
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February 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
haha i forgot to write my name on the previous review *fail* Anyway i liked reading about their club outfits naru sounds like one sexy bitch! LOL Booty shorts what what!! XD
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February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was HOT! lol, I loved the little self gratification scene in the bathroom, naughty Naruto and pervy Sasu kun lol, I LOVE them sooo much, and finally the naughtyness is appearaing and it flowed so well it didnt feel odd or strange at all it was in their character, the ones you have built for them and I totally loved it, I do have to say that Itachi is several shades of screwed up for going after a guy his little brother was going out with and then flaunting him in his face, I sooo hope Gaara gives him a hard time, Itachi deserved it, but seriously Sasuke kun should of been more mindful of poor Naruto's feelings and kept his anger in check around the blond, but I did love the possesivesness, LOVE posesive Sasuke, and posesive Naru was soo cute too, omg the scene with Gai had me spitting out my water it was too funny..ooh man I cant wait for the next chapter...I was soo glad to see a new chapter up tonight, it made me very happy, thank you for the great read and the smexyness, till next time keep up the great work, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh ya, I do want to apologige for all the spelling and what not in the review before this last one, I had taken some meds and they just happened to kick in in the middle of my silly little typing, I meant all I said and was coherant as in I knew what I was saying, but apperantly it was like being a bit drunk or what not, my hands and what not went all wonky, I do apologize...but anyhows....I do wonder what Sasuke has planned for Naruto, its Not sex I assume, darn it...so what can it be I wonder??? hmmmm lol, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can we just say..Dang!!!! little Naru is such a good sub! I wonder what the raven has in store for the little fox!
Post soon...can't wait!!!!
Post soon...can't wait!!!!
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February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I love Naruto's tails. They have their own personality. You were right Itachi is turning out to be a dick, but I still love him. I can never seem to hate him. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work!!!! HUGS!!! <3