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for Lost Symphonies

by yolotengo

person LadyWolf
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
more please....can't wait to read what's going to happen in the club....
Who was Naruto's ex??? Maybe Neji? Gaara???
I really like this fic...post soon!!
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it will be an interesting night. I can't wait to see what other couples will be on the club. I hope Neji's in the club as a Dom.:d
person Mija
schedule January 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ok ok this is where the chapter starts to take our prim proper cutesy boys and and make then into the hot stud muffins we know they are, this chapter show then a little more loose, a little more naughty which btw I LOVE and I sooo cant wait till we get down to the so called nitty grtty when Sasuke Dominance comes out and Naruto's submissive but naughtyness comes out to play with his new master,,,as for my self I dont believe the sex is to fast, in fact from alot of the D/s stories ive read they would have gone father by now or show alottttt more skin lol, I dont think peope in that sort of scene are mant to go slow and court there partners like regular vanilla type lovers, the D/s scene is different so they play and have romance in difffernt ways......and hey I gotta tell you how handy that crap would be if you could talk to a guy you like and then your both goin ok I think we hit it off well do you want to sigh the contract stating we will be a couble in a romantic level, dont forget to put down all the things you will not let me do to you in bed and the stuff you wont do for me in bed and walla, we are a couple and if you ever want to break up just give me your part of the contract and I will understand and it will be over.............ha if only regular lovin could be less complicated twould be sooo nice...lol anyhow this was indeed a terrice shapter, loving the look on Naru club clth I can sooo seee other Doms wanting a piece of him since he isnt collard and ooooooh God yes a possesive Sasuke is a drool worthy sexy...I just love that man...and when he fights for his blond oh he just makes himself look much more smexy....lol thanks for the fantastic read I was so happy to see a new chapter cant wait for the next one, till then keep up the awesome work, till then huggles and smiles Mija..:)
person Mija
schedule January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg I soo cant wait to see them go the to club, I wonder if Naru will see anyone he used to know and I wonder if there will be anyone there who will try to woe our dear Naruto away from his sexy raven, I always did love a possesive Sasuke who had to fight other men off to keep his cute little blonde lol, and again it just tickles me silly how prim and proper, how cute and cuddly they are with each other right now yet both are apart of the D/s scene and are talking about all sorts of naughty things, I love the little tidbits like Sasuke getting turned on hearing that Naruto likes it rough and oh the way Naruto can say he's open for anything yet get all embarrassed about enemas when he's no doubt never batted an eye over a dildo or butt plug lol, and ooh when Sasuke said he liked to use his mouth ALOT I almost fell over my seat with how that affected Naruto lol, you know Naruto's naughty D/s side combined with all the innocent blushing looks is gonna just drive our poor little Raven stud mad I cant wait to read more, looking foward to so much more, I cant wait, thanks for the great read, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
schedule January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is soooo exciting!!
schedule January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like their process of getting to know eachother. It was awesome having them meet for the first time at the restaurant too.x3
schedule January 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It seems everything's out in the open now. I really hope there are no problems between them from here on out. Maybe a rival for Naruto's affections cud stir up some drama, which I LOVE. But I'll wait and see what's in store for the wonderful couple.:d
person breath_of_fire
schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
do you think you're moving a bit fast? i.e. already taking Naruto to a club? yes they're not gonna do anything and yeah they have this special connection but it still seems a lil fast...

anyway, good chapter
person angelj232000
schedule January 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking the journey that they are taking. I like the way it is unfolding. Can't wait for the next chapter. I am now addicted. Keep up the awesome work. HUGS!!!! <3
person Mija
schedule January 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I was so excited to see an update! and this one was sweet and very cute, but I am looking foward to seeing how things start to work out for them once they start their roles as Dom and Sub, as I said right now its a bit hard to picture with how nice and proper they are being to each other, with the cute and sweetness, which I love by the way, I want to see how you mix that up with D/s and I do understand it does not mean sex or whips and leather right off the bat or at all lol, but there is a change and I am eager to see it, again loving the way this is going, cant wait to see how this goes and looking foward to seeing Itachi's character come into play as well although he souds a little slutty lol which is just tooo good and why is Naruto freaking out about Kiba? isnt this what Kiba wanted? Oh I cant wait, thanks for the awesome read, till next chapter huggles and smiles Mija..:-)