rate_review Reviews

I really wish you would finish this story. Don't see to many Kisame/Deidara fanfics out there and they seem to be my fav because of your work. Kinda liked the flash back but at the same time looking forward to seeing how the relationship blossom and if Kisa ever kick Itachi's ass for being a dick and will he try to mess with Deidara, Kisa and Dei are together? Ah man its been years, just hope to see something soon unless this has been forgotton T^T if so then I'm a bit sad lol.

Idk how that became a question, stupid auto correct. Anyway in the part I said "Will Itachi mess with Dei" It was suppose to be written like "Since Dei and Kisa are together? Will he do it, or will he not be an asshole about them? Ahh I wanna know so badly >.<

Great work tho, long chapters are a good thing in my opinion. Plus KisaZab is kinda hot not going to lie, but I go for more the DeiKisa. *wiggles eyebrows*

YAY another chapter and don't worry about it i like long chapters pretty damn nice if you ask me...and yes i had a feeling you liked ZabKisa can't see how I'd miss it with all the hints =P

Oh no! What happened?! I loved this story, please bring it back!

Please make it do that your story ain't hidden any more!! Plz!! This isn't the Leaf village, there's no need to be hidden! 。・゜・(ノД`)・゜・。 it's a good story, don't keep it locked away under AFF lock and key!

Great story!

It is clear that I do not speak or write English. But his story is so good I had to communicate it in some way.

I liked the story. Especially because this incredibly well portraying Kisame, my favorite character from Naruto.

And although I do not like the KisaDei (actually I'm more into KisaIta), I liked the way they managed to unite the couple.

I do not know how long will this story. Or if it is not published, but know that your story is good, and it would be a waste not to continue it. Especially when it is so far ahead.

I do not require you to follow, but if you ever decide to continue it, I'll be ready to continue reading it.

And no, I leave wishing you good luck.

Farewell, Hevith.

Pshhh. You get used to writing dick sucking scenes! If you think about sucking on a Popsicle it might help inspire you! ^.~ I loved the chapter! Deidara's super duper cuuuuute.:3c As for mistakes...I didn't really notice because of all the sexy dick sucking scene. ^.^ Can't wait for the next chapter!

I have never been interested in this pairing before, but after reading your story I'm actually liking it! Great story so far!:)Haha, I agree with Deidara about killing a hangover with more booze. :3 I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I'm really enjoying this! I don't often see this pairing and so far you've written it very well. I've also never seen a Samehada with so much personality; I love it! I think it's my favorite character too. The humour is spot on as is the sex. Overall, wonderful! I can't wait to see more of your work.