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for Online Predator

by Mushibubu

person Hi
schedule December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Incredibly funny and really interesting, cheered me up so much! Why isn't there more, though?
person nivell
schedule January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving the introduction, although there were some missing words here and there. Did Sai really die though? Oh man, I hope not!
schedule January 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was so hardcore that it was amazing :)
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the shit out of this one! More, more, more!
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! Poor Suigetsu!! This is do totally funny how Sasuke has brought him into this craziness. I can't WAIT for the next chapter!!!
person Carousel
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so awesome so far. It's hilarious, well-written, and I'm sure it will be sexy. <3 I can't wait to read more.
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. But it's lam not lamb, hehe.
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please Candy,

Sasuke is not a 'rouge' assassin, he's a rogue assassin. Big difference.

Interesting plot, though.
person Tamara
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this story already. First time reading a plot like this. Marital problems and Sasu having a hissy fit. Naru needing to have his SAsu back and a whole bunch of violence thrown in. Anticipate what you do next.
person conrada7
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!!! Absolutely AMAZING!!! I love it!!!! Update soon please?!?