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for The Lamp is On at Two In The Morning

by CloudyJay

schedule July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was so sweet!!! Sexy scene too but it still kept this realistic sweet feel to it. Totally loved it :)
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schedule June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet and romantic. It was cute how Sasuke didn't mind putting up with the cold house just to be with Naruto. I also liked that Sasuke tried to be encouraging about the move because it was better for Naruto. I think that shows more love than if he'd gotten angry over it. And the sex felt like a natural progression of the things that were happening between them (them being cold, laying down together, having a nice moment together, and Naruto initiating contact by hugging Sasuke), rather than feeling forced. You started off with the whole sketching cliche (thanks for that, Titanic), so I was expecting Sasuke to pop a boner over Naruto's sexiness and jump him (if we're following the cliche) but the way it actually happened was much nicer.

Hope to read more fics from you in the future. :)
schedule February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love tender moments like theirs. This was a really sweet story.:)