rate_review Reviews

This story is so detailed and well written. A few errors but you can read around them and still understand. I love it. Hopefully you continue it.

I am really enjoying this. I think it is the depth of the characters and the fact that most of them are trapped by tradition, or circumstance, or decisions that seemed right at the time but were unwise with hindsight. Also, I really like your Shikamaru. One small criticism - any chance you could use a more obvious break between the PoVs? Maybe a horizontal line?

I'm so anxious for them to be together again but what will happen to poor Hinata?

I haven't seen this pairing in so long, it's nice to see. Poor Hinata is troubled in this, I hope she turns out ok.