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for Lessons in Living

by Darkprism

person lo
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I really like where this is going. Sai is really quite endearing in this and I love their conversations with each other, nice job!
person satterb
schedule July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
"Zombiecock" LMAO! I just love your Sai. I really would like to hug Kakashi, but mainly I want to slap Tenzou! LOL just kidding. I have really missed this story, and I'm really thrilled that you were able to update. Thank you for all your hard work, and we'll all keep our eyes peeled for the next chapter.
schedule February 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I laughed til I cried reading this. Favorite line had to be Tenzou's memory about the carpet and being loved more minus a pinky toe. Funny, sweet, well paced and as always in your little world, amazing storyline and believable characters. Cannot wait to see what happens next.
person lo
schedule July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I can review again!!! As always the attention you pay to detail in this story is spectacular! I love how you develop each character, I love the scenes you paint so vividly. I am amazed that people that write like you are not published. I have wasted so much money on novels by people that don't even have a fraction of the talent you have. I know I am just heaping the praise on you but you deserve it.
schedule July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Abso-fucking-lutely beautiful. You have a way with words that surpasses the simplistic complex structure of joining letters together to make intelligible sounds to expresses thoughts that would have simply just hit you when you least expected it. I have been waiting for this chapter for sooooo long and you did not disappoint. I now can't fuckin wait for the next chapter and will be stalking your homepage's for the next instalment.
Your eternal fan always xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
schedule July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter seven was worth EVERY MINUTE of the wait. <3<3<3
person Carousel
schedule July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My condolences for your recent losses. As far as this chapter goes...I'm blown away. Dead. Super dead. I have a huge "Daddy" fetish and this was perfect. I can't even handle how wonderful and perfect it was.
schedule February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"Will you give it to me?" "No." Hilarious!! Tenzou wanted out so bad. I really feel for him having concerned friends that want him actively social. I've sort of been through something like recently. It's refreshing to read my fav Naruto crew going through it too.
schedule February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! He's got Jack in his death room for eternity because he just can't for the life of him let him go. So emotionally powerful, I can't wait go see more. I guess Kakashi doesn't know the extent of Tenzou's grief. Hope he finds out so he can help in another way that Tenzou's comes back to his most confident and assured self to love again. Poor Sai thinking he may be autistic. Can't wait to see more of him. Great chapter
schedule February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay!!! I finally have the chance to read a NEW story if yours along with everyone else!!:D
I really love the way you write, it flows off my tongue.
I couldn't wait to find out who was following him. This pairing will be quite interesting to read.