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Hilarious! I was appalled by the egregious spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes, but hilarious none the less! 

Ooooooo its sexy time!!!! Lol can't wait to see what happens next but I think we all know what's gonna go down lol hehehe ;) please update soon

Actually, I’m not a big fan of infantile, sex-bent and sex-dependent “teenage guys camping together” stories.. Sasuke and Naruto’s relationship seems to be very.. shallow. Do they really like each other and does it matter here? If the aim of the story is just to show Sasuke doing Naruto in some ‘extraordinary’ wild nature surrounding, squirrels, rabbits, birds singing round, well, then this will.. do. I just wish for more *really* funny episodes, maybe to see Sasuke or Naruto, two city boys, trying these ‘fun activities’ for real or getting to know each other better..? Getting kinkier?
This Jiraya and Guy combination’s a good idea, use it to the max! Guy’s chest hairy???
Good luck with the story.