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for New World Order

by AvangalineHazel

person wowgoshdarnit
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE THIS PLEASE. OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
If you need a beta or ANY type of help, I can be of assistance.
I've fallen in love with stories before, but this is fucking fantastic and I feel IDK different about it. Aha, I hope that makes sense.
I'm not registered on here, but I am on FF.net, so you can find me there.
person smint45
schedule April 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just read this again and I must say again how amazing this story is!!!!! I adore it!!! And I hope you will update very soon!!! See you agian!!!
person thereader
schedule March 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please update! this is great and i can't wait til chapter two!!
person Carousel
schedule March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this. It was so amazing and I really want more. Please add more~
schedule March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omgosh! that was amazing!!! at first there was all that description of the energy disasters and I was afraid that this world would take a lot of explaining and might end up being too technical to enjoy... but that...was... awesome!!! I loved that peek into Sasuke's personality that we got from the guards and I love that the Uchiha's are a powerful family. And hunters with weapons... that makes for a hot Sasuke lol. And I like that he's aware of Naruto being broken and that he wasn't a slave until now... that will make him less subservient which is what Sasuke needs. I am so going to love this story :)
schedule March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm extremely curious about this story. Really looking forward to the next chapter! I wonder how you've written Itachi and the rest of the Uchihas. And the way you described Sasuke's mask I immediately had an image in my head of Kakashi wearing one.. Will he be a hunter as well?
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am very interested in this story and I can't wait to read about Naruto's first day as Sasuke's slave.
person Tawana Welch
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, this is going to be an amazing story that'll probably make me cry. I can't wait for the next chapter.:)
person Stacy
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WoW! That's a really interesting story line. I like it.....a lot!! Can't wait to read more and meet Itachi! Will Kisame make an appearance?
person smint45
schedule March 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this stpry is just amazing!!!! I totally love it!!! This futuristic world you created seems so real, just like I imagine the world too be when a nuclear catastroph happens!!!! You really have me hooked here^^ This story has advanced with just the first chappy to my favorite!!! I really hope that you will continue and post the next chappie soon!!!! I can't wait to see where this intriguing story will lead and what will happen one Naruto enters the house and meets the rest of the family!!! And I really can't wait to discover what Sasuke is hunting^^ I really love the way you discribed the historic happenings and the detailed view you give us of Narutos and Sasukes personalities^^ It is really an amazing start for a story!!! See you again soon!!!