rate_review Reviews

^^ looking forward for the next chappie

the story itself is well paced. sasuke is in character, but naruto did feel a little out until the end, when he decided to go with sasuke. the only real problem was your use of first person vs second and third. there were places when they were not used corectly. most specificly when naruto and sasuke were escaping through the croud. other then that it was a good read. i liked how you used what happend in tokyo, but why are you using australia as the place for this story? is it because you are from there?
well i cant wait to see how this story will go. i will be looking for updates so please do it soon