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June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I didn't expect to like this story, but I had time to kill so I read it. I LOVE IT!!!!!
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June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am blown away by this! I can't get enough of it. I love the Shika/Neji and the oh so subtle Pein/Juugo probability. Can't wait to read more.
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April 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that Sasuke and Itachi are together again but my heart aches for them and the time they lost. It would be hard to get back into the swing after 10 years apart.
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March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
But Itachi wasn't alone either...he had Kisame!!!! I can't believe how childish he's being. But I really love the way this turned out. And I wonder how hot Kakashi will be to get his little Sasuke back. Did they ever have any kind of relationship, or did Sasuke and Juugo? Can't wait for more. Thank you so much for your hard work and for updating on this site for me. Thank you!
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March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ahh!
Please tell me you are going to continue this!!
Loving the story!!
Please tell me you are going to continue this!!
Loving the story!!
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March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm going to be brutally honest with you. I skimmed over your story except the parts having to do with Sasuke. Unlike many, I am only reading this story for his character, and I was sure he would have a lot more screen time, but he only takes up an inch, so will that be changing sometime soon?? I really do hope so.
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March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They've finally found one another!!!! I was hoping Hidans' death would be a little more torturous, but it was fun to know Neji was kind of toying with him. I loved the way you portrayed Haku and Zabuza. I think it would have been nice to have a little taste of their relationship, but since they both died, maybe it was easier to not know anything about them LOL. I really look forward to more of this story. Thank you for updating it here.
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March 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I was so happy that you updated it so soon after I read it. I can't wait to see how it will continue! :)
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December 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you how much I LOVE this story??? Thank you so much for the update. I look forward to more.
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December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story since the beginning and so far have had no problems with it, it is in actual fact one of my favourites at the moment. You captured the period really well and haven't shied away from the squalid life of a pirate ship on a long journey as well as their ruthlessness which is giving the entire story a good texture.
However I was a little disappointed in the last chapter to see such a big time skip, particularly with Itachi and Kisame. While it was nice to see where Sasuke was at, at that current point seeing Kiasme and Itachi going from the characters they were in chapter 12 (calling the side story chapter 13)to the characters they were in 14 left quite a bit to be desired in the area of their relationship, mainly how it evolved emotionally.
I'm really hoping for a flashback or two to see how they evolved together to get to their current point.
But other than that, fantastic work so far and the artwork to ge with it is great as well.
However I was a little disappointed in the last chapter to see such a big time skip, particularly with Itachi and Kisame. While it was nice to see where Sasuke was at, at that current point seeing Kiasme and Itachi going from the characters they were in chapter 12 (calling the side story chapter 13)to the characters they were in 14 left quite a bit to be desired in the area of their relationship, mainly how it evolved emotionally.
I'm really hoping for a flashback or two to see how they evolved together to get to their current point.
But other than that, fantastic work so far and the artwork to ge with it is great as well.