rate_review Reviews

This story is sick on so many levels. Yet, I enjoyed reading it for the fucked up Lolita-sequence thing it is.

You have made Kakashi SO creepy. It really does remind me of Lolita, how he thought of her at the auction like she was trying to be alluring or something. I really loved that chapter because it really skeeved me out and made me uncomfortable.

Parts of the sex chapter and after sex chapter I didn't like as much because his reaction was too extreme. I put the sexual things to the jutsu -- which was a fabulous idea -- but the thing afterwards where he wanted to be the only man didn't make sense to me at all. It just seems like he would never have that reaction or that thought.

I liked how the sex ended, how he realized what he was doing and ran away. His thoughts about the Madam were good as well,"; his reason for denying her was good and not kitschy.

A lot of KakaSaku hides in the older ages, so I like this story purely for its balls, though the chances of some pedo actually fapping to it seems too high for my tastes.

I look forward to the rest.

Just wanted to say the last anon review was by me, Amrun, both in here and ffn. Didn't mean for it to be anon.

great chapter update soon

Kakashi better get his pale ass back in there! What's he been doing for 23 days! He better be saving other youngs from this woman or something!

Pakkun, way to make him feel worse. If I were Kakashi I would have slammed that door so hard half the wall would be gone. Great, I can't wait for more!

That was short!!

Hey, that was an okay chapter, pretty short though, and not a lot went on. You ended the chapter just as things were beginning to get interesting. :P

23 days!!! Update please! I need to know what's going to happen! Please!!!

great chapter wonder what will happen since he left? update soon please

Hey! when the next chapt comes out?