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for Heart-Shaped Box

by JazzyBell

person chika ishikawa
schedule April 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Plz finish story!!!!!!!!
person tillean
schedule April 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's... interesting. I prefer stories that follow the manga/anime a little more than this, but the concept is good. I also like the way you portray Sakura; strong, insecure, confused, confident, scared, prideful. It's how I remember being when I was her age- so kudos on that! ^_^v
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm still liking the story. You're approaching it with an adept hand. It certainly deserves more reviews than my two.
person Anon
schedule March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The story does seem promising. It steps into uncomfortable territory, but that in itself isn't a bad thing. Just because they're sex story doesn't mean it has to be erotic. Dive into emotional depth and you'll have something unique and different than the typical story on this website.