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Chapter 92. As horrible as it may sound, I'm glad you decided to have the virus infiltrate, but I don't want Naruto to get sick and die, either. This is why I hate conflict. But you can't have a story without it.

Anyway, keep up the good work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.

Chapter 91. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OMG!! This chapter ended unexpectedly. Well, the way it ended was unexpected. I'm still tingling all over. I can't wait for what will happen next. Will Rin be able to ananlyze what's in the canister? Will there be a need to put the hybrids into stasis? OMG! I can't wait! Thanks for the update! You never disappoint!

I have just finished reading what you have so far of your series & have enjoyed the unfolding story & how your writing has grown over the years you have written. I look forward to reading more as you release them. Thank you for the entertainment & best of luck with writing.

Loved the shower scene, but really loved the fallout from the shower scene! Now, dying to know what the "gasp" Kimmimaro let out when he walked into the meeting room was all about. Did he bring the contagion in with him as well? All of this is freaking me out. I still don't trust Madara and I hope all his discretion's are discovered. Thank you so much for all your wonderful work!

Oh shit! Kimmimaro is such a tool, in all senses of the word. He feels more and more plastic with each encounter, which is funny considering he is possibly the character with least, if any, growth. Thanks for the haha shower moment amongst all the tension. Things seem adrift at the moment, which leaves your reader(s?) feeling at least as antsy as your characters.

I've really enjoyed the whole story so far, so much so that I've been looking forward to your updates each week for around a year. I get the feeling that this story is about to come to a close, and I'm wondering if you'll be continuing your writing.

It'd be handy if you had a twitter so that you could keep us (me) updated on exactly when you upload each chapter, or even just so we can follow you personally. Plus I'm sure having a more accessible platform for communication with people interested in you or your writing would feel quite gratifying.

Just a thought?

NO! Did Kimamaro…. Di he release the poison????!!!
But they are ready, aren’t they?
And I thought that Madara was supposed to swear he would never challenge for leadership in the interview…. but he didn’t…
This chapter was great! Exciting, interesting… and even funny. The shower scene was hilarious. Just that cliffhanger…. Damn.
Thank you for the update!

OMG SQ!!!! That was my total tech sentences:) I didn't see any of that happening. You are so brilliant:) To come with that! You pulled both your six guns out in this chapter and fired the last shot with that cliffy:) That is a huge back breaking cliffy!! Yea Baby wOw! I was scare of what Kurotsuchi or Old man might do. I was worried about Naruto. I had a nose bleed with Sasuke in the shower:) Yea you had all my emotions working in this 'precautionary' chapter:) SQ I love every word. Thank you for your hard work ^_^

Hello! Just wanted to let you know that I missed your story so much that I started over from the beginning. Again :) No matter how many times I read it, I'm always pleasantly surprised at how rich and fleshed out all the characters are, and how entertaining the storyline(s) is/are. I've finally settled on a favorite character! I love seeing how Sumiko is developing into an intense, clever girl, and can totally see her a few standards later as an adult. You're doing an amazing job! I'm at 'Delays', I think, in Leader. Once I finish the newest updates, I'll review again!

Let's see, what sort of encouragement can I provide? I think I've said before, you are a fabulous writer and I'd read a cereal box or instructions for assembling office furniture if you wrote it. But I especially love the universe you have created. It seems so quixotic to create something this wonderful that by its nature (fanfiction, slash, Space Opera) has a limited readership.

It must be really hard to finish an epic story, but you still keep coming up with twists. I know you're big on redemption;is it possible for Madara? (I doubt it, but you rehabilitated Itachi and made him into one of my favorite characters, so anything's possible.) I can't wait to see what is happening with the toad hybrids. And I know you can't address every loose end, but you've foreshadowed it a bit so I'm still hoping to hear about Ranmaru.