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I am not sure which way you are going to go with this - though I know which way I hope. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I'm sorry to hear that you are struggling with the story. But that's understandable considering how long this story has gone on for. I'm still really enjoying it thus far and still look forward to reading every week if that helps. Maybe you should consider updating less often to give yourself time to get your mojo back. We won't be mad if we have to wait a little longer to read a new chapter as long as you are able to keep writing the story.

As for the chapter, I'm glad that Sasuke is finally using his brain when it comes to Madara. Nostalgia is great in theory but he really needs to remember what Madara has done so far and act accordingly. I look forward to Haru and Hikaru finally learning to get along. I never quite understood their aversion to each other because at the end of the day they are brothers. They should be able to appreciate the other for who they are not for what they are not.

It's always really interesting to see the interactions with not-Izuna. It's just layers over layers of beautiful subterfuge, misunderstandings, and plots. So many plots.

I have the same fears as I did after the last chapter. I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop so to speak. I am astonished that Sasuke seems to have forgotten how much torment and heartache "Izuna sama" has inflicted on his family. I do like the twist of Madara wanting to become himself once again, and I'm curious to see where that takes this story. Is he going to end up being outed by an adversary or will he out himself? I'm also wondering how Hikaru and Haru are going to end up feeling about each other as this story draws to a close. So many things going on. I look forward to more. Thank you for all your wonderful hard work!

hey Mannah sorry to hear you have a literary backup i just wanted to say that once again you have an excellent story a beautiful story arc and a great eye for detail perhaps you are missing a detail and that is why you are having trouble it probably sounds silly but you know how i do it when i am at a loss. simply go over your story so far as if you were reading it for the first time when you reach the end you will probably have brand new ideas. good luck as always.
god bless The horseman of death

Chapter 90. Take that, "Izuna". Ha ha! I can't wait to see how "Izuna" is going to react to Sasuke's condition.

Wow, I was pissed at Sasuke for going to this meeting behind Naruto's back, but I'm impressed that he was so tough. Still, he's not safe yet. I hope he will go back safely. Neither Kisame nor Naruto are with him.....

WoW!!! SQ wOw!! I'm speak less for the moment! I didn't see Old man giving the warning. Yea I know it has to have something in it for him to. But still wOw I'm shocked. Thank goodness the brothers are putting in the effort to get along better:) And when Nartuo fines out Sasuke didn't tell him about this little secret meeting(#%$*)is all I can say:) I think Naruto will feel the need to give a lecture:) Sasuke handled it well though. His enter Naruto voice serves him well:) The disguise Sasuke had on was hot:) Yea Baby! I'm wondering what the surprise is Shika and Sai have in store for Haru?! I loved it and you too! ^_^

Great chapter!! I cant wait to see how the kids do on the mission!! It nice getting to see yhem interact with one another!! I feel like we haveny seen that much recently. I really hope you go into detail about ran and haru's first time together!!! You always swich scenes before you really get into it! I think it would be really interesting to read that ewith rans gift and all. I'm really happy that he and haru have worked everythig out and are good and solid now. I would love a short story about yasushi and yoshimi, like when they're getting ready to make their relationship know or when they first realize they have romantic feelings for eachother. We just dont here about them muh which i totally understand in this story. Maybe when you are havig trouble writing leader you could try writing a short story for tales in tarresade (i spelledthat wrong didnt i lol). Just an idea, keep up the good work!! I really enjoy your stories and cant wait till the next instalment!! Sorry i dont review often. I'll try harder!!

I loved the ending for the chapter. Sasuke was awesome. He didn't let himself be pushed into a corner. Really looking forward to reading more and Madara's reaction to Sasuke's ultimatum.


Thanks for an awesome read and hope that you can overcome all the obstacles in your way and can soon find some inspiration. I really find your writing spellbinding and always look forward to reading. Take care and see you soon.


Moonmoore